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NaruTemlover
2009-12-12 . chapter 12
Is asking again for you to update this story. Is hoping that you have not given up on this story.
bloodgolore
2009-12-05 . chapter 12
I love this! please update or else!
bloodgolore
2009-12-05 . chapter 13
Oh my gosh, please update! I will get mad if you don't. Seriously.
kk1987
2009-11-21 . chapter 13
I realise it hasn't be updated in such along time, but please, please, please don't give up on this story and update soon.
shadowdragon4444
2009-11-18 . chapter 13
Please pick this story back up. I simply love it. It is one of my favorites. I got off of Fanfiction for a while and it took me for ever to find this story again. I am very sad that you haven't updated in so long. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
PeterAmaranth09
2009-10-24 . chapter 13
ah why is the best ones never finished :(
this is brilliant pure brilliance :)
Amore
2009-10-03 . chapter 6
Seriously, I had tears in my eyes from laughing so much. It should be illegal to be so funny, I nearly died from overexposure to pure awesomeness ;D
brezy bri
2009-09-18 . chapter 13
NO!
it ends here. no no no no no no no no.
i am in love with this story. like literally. i'm serious, ive had so much fun reading this! i love it! everything about it is amazing. but alas it had been 3 years since an update, but i will stil put it on alert, just in case.. wink wink nudge nudge.
love love love love love it all!
LoyalHufflepuffTara
2009-09-16 . chapter 8
=D great story i love it
taintedlegacy
2009-09-13 . chapter 13
Awesome story! I really hope this isn't abandoned!
WhiteElfElder
2009-09-11 . chapter 13
The dark clouds gather, the thunder booms, the lightning flashes...and Harry/Ryan runs around pranking the little boys and girls of the world. I like this story as it is a nice blend of comedy (which has me laughing quite a lot) and drama.
dontcallmemadeline
2009-08-29 . chapter 13
This is good, but are you ever going to update it? It was just getting interesting...
Jenny
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
Ok, I can't even read past the first chapter. While the story might be fine, it's a pet peeve of mine that I can't stand it when people completely mangle Latin in order to try and make their story seem more 'real'.

"Can is non patesco aspicio super visio illorum is has proditor": As near as I can actually translate it comes out as "Can(eng?) he not I am revealed I look upon above/upon appearance the ones whose he has(eng?) betrayer." It's obvious you simply plugged this phrase into a generic 'translator' to come up with the words. Unfortunately, Latin has numerous declensions and conjugations for nouns and verbs, and cannot be simply translated word by word and be coherent.

The use of 'is' for 'he' is redundant, as the verb in the sentence is understood to contain it. Your verbs are all 1st person present tense, and as such are not conjugated correctly for the meaning you wish to get across. Your nouns are incorrectly declined. Patesco means 'to be laid open, bare, exposed, to be revealed', so you are using an incorrect homonym here. The word you are looking for is 'bear'. Proditor is a noun meaning 'betrayer', not a verb.

A more proper Latin translation of the phrase "Can he not bear to look upon the faces of those who he has betrayed?" would be: Non haberaris facultatis aspicere facies populorum qui prodidi?

Please refrain from using Latin if you can't be bothered to put a little effort into at least attempting to do it correctly.
LivingRightNow
2009-08-26 . chapter 13
i luv ur story...but plsplspls update! how can u just abadon it??
Adrence
2009-08-24 . chapter 6
This story is Hilarious! This is brilliant! I'm going to keep reading it now... Hope you update!
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