I just noticed that you wrote a fourth piece of your Miharu/Jin storyline and it made my day. I absolutely loved the other three and the first chapter of this story proves to me that I will also love it. Your writing is very mature, which makes me enjoy it.

Oh my God, its finished... -cries-

And what's sadder is, you're not coming back!! Promise you'll at least visit the section a few times every so often when you're bored and take a peek at a couple of fics around here? We could use a good writer around here, veteran or not. Or maybe peek around good old Thunderxtw's stuff? lolz.

Seriously, this Series has just been all ups and downs, and you've written every situation perfectly. Jin, Miharu, Xiaoyu, etc; they were all constantly in character. Constantly. Never once did you stray away from their character, whether it was speech-wise or in their mannerisms, and I applaude you for that.

Your plot devices have always been excellent and they've fitted every situation perfectly. Whether it was Miharu's Mother dying in 'Not The Admirer' or Kazuya buying Miharu and Jin that baby book in 'Life So Complicated' (words cannot express how much I adore your Kazuya. A-FREAKING-DORE. DUDE! I mean I love the way you write Jin and the others but man... LOVE your Kazuya, best interpretation out there by far)... they've just all WORKED. Every. Single. Time.

I wish you the best of luck in your future fics, and watch out for me later with your Bloody Roar fics! ;) (Especially that one about Shenlong... WOO! XD). Never stop writing. Otherwise I'll (somehow) hunt you down and strap you in front of the computer, and MAKE you write. XD Take care, Indigo Siren. I don't know about your other readers, but I'll never forget you or these stories. Thank you for the good times :)

Indigo Siren! It's been forever:) Well I have some time to read some stories so I knew I had to come over and give you my support. Hopefully I'll be able to catch up with everything I've missed:) Okay so on with the review: If only Namco would read any of your Miharu fics, she'd be a prominent character in the games. You write her so well and you've given her personality, something Namco never really did since she only appeared in one game.

I love how she is sensitive but she still has courage inside. The Kazuya dance did seem creepy and I don't think Jin should've gotten so crazy over it. Well, given his history with Kazuya, I can see why he was mad but still. Xiaoyu is so bubbly and cute and I always love reading the scenes between her and any of the characters you choose to write about. Also,I loved how you included Anna in there. Ever since Thunderxtw's Fatal Instinct series, I've looked forward to stories that included her. You write her well also!

The relationship between Julia and Lei is interesting but I remember it from your last story. It's a change from the norm, but it's refreshing at the same time. Steve and Asuka are really cool so far the way you portray them and I look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. If I was Miharu seeing Jin checking out Asuka like that, I would've slapped the cheek off his face, right in front of everybody too. He would've recognized right there and then and respect would be demanded from now on. Lol:)

I still remember that battle between Miharu and Kazuya from last time. He really stomped her! But at least she put up a good fight though, so it wasn't completely one-sided. Yeah back to the dance, I can understand why she'd be afraid to say no, after that fight and everything else. Especially since it's her boyfriend's father which he hates with a passion. I hope she gets the part in the play, so hopefully soon I'll get to find out. We have a hurricane coming so I'm hoping it won't knock out the power, or worse! Anyways, thank you again for your inspiration and I'm proud of you that you still continued this even though you felt ignored. I hope to talk to you soon, take care!:)

Wah no you're one chapter off finishined :( And then you're leaving the section, for good :( Promise you'll come back and visit occasionally though, k? It won't be the same without you here (to me, at least).

And as always, great job. I was surprised, though, that you didn't have Miharu go and say good bye to Jin (at the moment, in this chapter. Who knows, what awesomeness you've got ready and waiting for the Epilogue, she might go say bai :D!).

Anyway, I know this is a bit early, but congratulations on finishing a fantastic fic. This, and all your other Tekken works, are full of win. Can't wait to read your Bloody Roar stuff when I get around to it (I play that game too, rofl).

Take care dude.

It's over...at least the part with Devil Jin is.

Asuka really hung in there and was made out to be as tough as she is in the game. The parts with Jun really added to the drama. She always did the best for her son. Sucks Namco had to kill her off. I'm starting to like her.

I expected Anna to appear, but then I remembered she's gone. Oh well. :(

Ah, it ends with Miharu riding atop Panda's back...into the sunset XD. I presume the next chapter will be the closing chapter? Looking forward to it!

Aww,poor Miharu! Well, Jin keeps on thinking about Asuka so Miharu should feel left out! Great Chap! Lubb it!!

You know, I've always loved your battle scenes, and this one more than the others was painted perfectly in my head. Well done :)

Finally got around to reading this chapter and the rest of chapter 17.

Damn, this stuff's gettin' really good. Miharu's quest to relieve Jin reminds me of an old tale I read somewhere before. Can't quite remember it, but maybe that's where the inspiration came from. It's cool that Asuka is trying to help Miharu, especially with the negative feelings Miharu once had toward her in the earlier chapters.

So, no more Anna, huh? Aww. Oh well. At least her and Lee are together and she gets to keep in touch with her nephew. Quite a happy ending for both of them. ^_^

Btw, Junking is here. He's sleeping at the moment, but he says hi and hopes you're doing well.

Until your next chapter.

i hope Miharu can make Jin come bak to hos senses b4 he harms her. nice chap^^

YAY YOU UPDATED AGAIN!

And as always, a fantabulous update.

Ooh I wonder how Asuka'll help them :o

Keep up the great work :D

YES! AN UPDATE! THANK YOU INDIGO SIREN. FINALLY -gives massive cookie- XD

And as always, an excellent update! Keep up the good work :)

Come on, you've been updateless enough, missy! I know you're not completely into Tekken anymore (judging by your bio and what not) but at least try to finish this awesome fic :( The "Not The Admirer" Series is one of my favourite fan fics and I'm itching to find out what you have in store next. So... Update please -pout- XD

Those girls sure took a beatin'.

Great and amusing interaction between Hwo, Miharu, and Baek. Does the drama ever stop for Miharu? What happens if Jin runs into her again in his Devil form?

Speaking of bed, I could use a nap myself. Haven't had much sleep lately.

Later.

Note to self: Never badmouth Xiaoyu's friends.

"You, however, are a whiny, overacting spew stain!”

lol. That's a side of Xiaoyu we rarely get to see. Namco should defiantly include something like that in the next game.

As for Ganryu, Julia, and Anna at the beginning...lol.

Seeing as what's happened to Miharu, I wouldn't blame her for feeling scared and unsafe. Not to mention thinking the possibilities of what might happen if she went home.

Ah, I see Junking has sent his review. He's trying to catch up on my stuff too. That's a lot of chapters, but he's surprised me before.

Anyway, update this crazy but intriguing drama. :)

Hey Indigo Siren! Wow I finally got some free computer time to read fanfiction. I must say after not having been around for months, when I read this chapter I remembered why it was that I loved this series so much! I loved every detail whether it was just the food they ate or the things they said, you are very good at details. Miharu should definately go for the play! I loved how Steve came to the rescue towards the end! You're good! Well until next time, keep up the good work!:)