(tearing up) I have to say, not much makes me cry, but this, this is almost making me. You convey Colin's pain so beautifully that it hurts.

I read this entire story again between various tasks yesterday, and I have to tell you that I am dying to know the ending! Your writing is exquisite, and I love the way you have gradually spun out not only Peter and Edumund's connection to each other, but Peter's connection to his siblings, and the siblings' loving but awkward interactions with their returned father. Colin is, I think, extraordinarily interesting as you paint him, because he is not only a father but a soldier, and someone capable of recognizing the residue of war in his sons. I am so looking forward to reading more.
Cheers,
Harmony Lover

you are the most absoulute positvly best writer on fanfiction. your stories make me feel like i am watching a move. forgive me C.S. Lewis but i think sentimental star has outdone you. the heartfelt moments between edmund and peter make my heart swell.

You are going to update? And soon? You're an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.

awesome story! loved everything about it! if they were looking for nominations for a fanfiction to be made into a movie, I'd nominate this story! Keep up the fantastic work!
As always,
Fan of the Just King :)

Is that an actual song at the end? It's a very nice poem if not. If it is can you direct me where to find it?

:)

Kitty

P.S. I'm not sure if I'm just used to your stories or my hormones are back in place, but I find myself almost wishing I could cry over your stories again. It disappoints me because it makes me feel like I'm not getting the feeling of your stories like I did with the first I read. Ah, well. I still enjoy them a LOT. :)

Wow! truly truly I loved this so much! I've been searching the pits and recesses of FFN to find a fic about them and their parents when they got back to england, and viola! here it is! It's marvelous--i LOVE the bond between them, and I'm so pleased with the way you've shown their father to understand-but-not-really, and i CANNOT wait for more, I swear. I love that their father listened, and they invited the professor, which was a good move. I'd just like to see the inevitable anger from their father, because honestly, it's like he lost his children. and i'm hoping su comes to her right mind in this fic. it's the one place where i sorely love deviations from cannon. *sigh*. UPDATE!
Love,
Lady Merlin

do you ever write slash?

hi sentimental star!
this is my most favourite story of all of . keep up the gr8 work! I'm looking foreward to reading Ch18.

Frowns

Thought I had this on Story Alert . . . hmm

Oh well, FOUR

Just noticed

"you DID die"

When did Edmund die?

very nice

Very intense story! I've really enjoyed watching their dad trying to understand how they've all changed so much. I'm looking forward to reading more!

A very sweet chapter.

okay, i have to know something: was their dad referring to them having sex or something ? cause that part completely confused me.