you are the most absoulute positvly best writer on fanfiction. your stories make me feel like i am watching a move. forgive me C.S. Lewis but i think sentimental star has outdone you. the heartfelt moments between edmund and peter make my heart swell.

You are going to update? And soon? You're an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.

awesome story! loved everything about it! if they were looking for nominations for a fanfiction to be made into a movie, I'd nominate this story! Keep up the fantastic work!
As always,
Fan of the Just King :)

Is that an actual song at the end? It's a very nice poem if not. If it is can you direct me where to find it?

:)

Kitty

P.S. I'm not sure if I'm just used to your stories or my hormones are back in place, but I find myself almost wishing I could cry over your stories again. It disappoints me because it makes me feel like I'm not getting the feeling of your stories like I did with the first I read. Ah, well. I still enjoy them a LOT. :)

Wow! truly truly I loved this so much! I've been searching the pits and recesses of FFN to find a fic about them and their parents when they got back to england, and viola! here it is! It's marvelous--i LOVE the bond between them, and I'm so pleased with the way you've shown their father to understand-but-not-really, and i CANNOT wait for more, I swear. I love that their father listened, and they invited the professor, which was a good move. I'd just like to see the inevitable anger from their father, because honestly, it's like he lost his children. and i'm hoping su comes to her right mind in this fic. it's the one place where i sorely love deviations from cannon. *sigh*. UPDATE!
Love,
Lady Merlin

do you ever write slash?

hi sentimental star!
this is my most favourite story of all of . keep up the gr8 work! I'm looking foreward to reading Ch18.

Frowns

Thought I had this on Story Alert . . . hmm

Oh well, FOUR

Just noticed

"you DID die"

When did Edmund die?

very nice

Very intense story! I've really enjoyed watching their dad trying to understand how they've all changed so much. I'm looking forward to reading more!

A very sweet chapter.

okay, i have to know something: was their dad referring to them having sex or something ? cause that part completely confused me.

wow.
as much as i love the closeness between peter and edmund, i think it may be a tad too emotional, ya know? well, maybe not emotional persay, but too gushy. don't get me wrong, i agree that they are that close, but they are still guys, even if they are a lot more affectionate and in touch with themselves than most.
does that make sense? i'm not sure it did...

anyway, i would like to see more on lucy and how she fits in in the sibling dynamics. i love her and don't want her to get left out!

and if there was some way we could see how susan ought to fit in with her siblings? that would be really cool too.

i love colin pevensie. you've done a great job with him. for some reason, i've always imagined him as understanding narnia better than helen. he's very well done!

i can't wait to see them at the castle.

question. is this the east coast or west coast (or i guess the southern coast) of england? 'cause if it's the east, you can do some sweet flashback sunrise thing xD

so anyway, UPDATE SOON! i can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you for sharing with us! I'm intrigued, and can't wait to see where you go next.