Aww! Zat was adorable! I loved it.

:)

very nice
but there were a couple of things i didn't understand here and there but they were minor so no need to worry. oh, one question though. WHO WRITES A FANFIC SO LATE! but that doesn't need to be answered.
other than that, it was good. and good luck with any of your other flicks.

Me like :)

A short story, but it was a good read! The parenthesis around some of the despriptions did get a little distracting, and probably could have been left out, but other than that, I enjoyed it, awesome work!

All I can say is Wow that was al,ost like reading a book. the way you put the story line the way you did. It was fantastic. It was like I was holding a Sly Cooper book and reading about my favorite video game. That was really impressive.

Thats a great story, keep up the good work,i think you are a natural at writing, hope to see more of your work, ttul, byebye

I was thinking about those numbers, that "what the hell are they?" But NOW I know :D Hey, this was really good, it's something Sly would actually do! ;D
This is a one-shot? NOO! You have to publish your other work too! pretty please!
Heiduska :D

Pretty appitizeing.

cute, funny, enjoyable.

The big three!

Hurray on your first fanfiction and continue to write as well and detailed as you did here. Good Luck!