you know they stange guys in theis story sound like Sounansha form your other story Darkest Before Dawn. If thats true the Wraith are going to bee very unhappy (massive understatement).

I hope you decide to get a beta to tidy up your spelling and vocabulary. Apart from you spelling typhoon 'taifun' and Teyla as 'Theela' it is very jarring and puts me off wanting to read more. It would be a shame to miss out on a good story because of too many errors. Thank you.

Cool, awesome story, I'm interested in seeing where you take this.

Just one question though, by 'Theela' do you mean...Teyla?

Just wondering is all *shrugs*

Anyhoo, please update again soon!