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Sephony
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Aww this is simply too cute! Great work!!
Aimee
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
Wow, I really enjoyed your Hikaru no Go stories! I know it's wishful thinking to hope you will write that one shot on Ogata-sensei since you have not touched this fandom for years now, but I would really love to read it. Ogata needs to be vindicated! LOL First you got him mobbed by Arika's fangirls, then Shidou bought his chocolates by mistake... I feel for the man!
Cross - The Damned Alchemist
2008-09-23 . chapter 1
Aw... That was so cute and touching... ^^~ It was a perfect sequel... ^w^=
Kitsune Demon Girl
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
Cute! Love it so much! Thanks a ton for posting such an swesome fic! :3
Chibi Hayaku Hashiru
2007-11-23 . chapter 1
I hope you write that bonus chapter or another sequal or something!! I really want to find out who Ogata was going to give that Valentine to!! :)
Yue Ryong - Shadowborne
2006-12-09 . chapter 1
Aww... that's so sweet. And yes, I would very much like a chgapter on Ogata. I wanna know who his valentine was for, dammit! $_$
rebecca85
2006-09-11 . chapter 1
And the sweetness continues... I'm happy that Hikaru won them all with the gifts. I like it when his popular... Especially with Touya... *sighs dreamily* "And that makes all the diffirence."
Yay~ Mata ne~

Luv, rebecca
blunightrunner
2006-09-08 . chapter 1
this story was great, but it really made me want to hear about when touya's mother finds out who he "girl" he likes really is, maybe u could do a sequel to this one called akira's mothers day or something
DarklyAsphyxial
2006-08-12 . chapter 1
i normally dont support Hikaru and Akira fics, but this one's an exception! it was funny and sweet too! keep up the good work!!
pink
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
Super cute fic. I love it! The best romantic sequel I have ever read! ^_^
Plushie Heartless
2006-07-05 . chapter 1
Sparkle, sparkle... I am a-sparkle~ This fanfic is sparkling, that is what it is. ^__^ I am smiling and giggling and enjoying myself greatly.

I love your portrayal* of Akira's mum. ^__^

(*- ah, is that how portrayal is spelled? I cannot spell. Cannot remember, o well...)

Hm. You know, in any other context, me shrieking, 'Akira got him ramenn... Ah! That's so CUTE!' would be very strange, no? That is just what I did, however...

I am happy. This fic makes me so happy... *waves hands in the air*
firefly12
2006-06-20 . chapter 1
Okay, now everybody go aw...:D I loved it! So cute! Hehe, a ramen gift certificate...That's really sweet. Good job! Who was Ogata going to give the Go valentine to in the last story? I wonder...:)
Teldra
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
Cute!
Emerin
2006-02-08 . chapter 1
*SQUEE* that was friggin ADORABLE! Hikaru and Akira are just way too cute =^_^= PLEASE do more! Its just so damn fluffy, I can't stand it ::huggles Hikaru and Akira:: SO CUTE!1
Euphie
2006-02-03 . chapter 1
sorry it took me so long to review ^^;;

This final version is great - so fun to read! a few things I really liked:

"her child was as mild-mannered and self-sufficient as her husband"

that's a great description of Akira - very much an "its okay mommy, I do it" type of kid.

"the whisper of Akira’s bangs against his brow" - I know this is an odd thing to pick out, but details like this make the story easy to visualize as the characters are reinforced in our minds.

*loves you* It's a beautiful fic - so sweet and touching! Thank you! I feel all fuzzy inside. ^^
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