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luckless-is-me
2009-11-15 . chapter 11
I've read this through a few times now. And, I fon't know if it's just a clitch, but I think a part is missing. Instead of Severus saying that he only has one uniform, he says “I´.”

Just informing you of that little problem, so there's no confusion for newer readers.
schimelle
2009-11-01 . chapter 14
So I'm reading this again for the second time within a few weeks and I don't think my first review expressed how freakin' awesome this story is. Even tho I'm reading it again, I'm still as hooked as the first time. This fanfic is just so perfect, I don't know how else to describe it and I'm really really sad that you haven't updated in like a year, it makes me really scared that you're never going to finish this story! Ah! PLEASE do. I think you have a lot of talent. :)
Phoenix-sophie
2009-10-09 . chapter 31
really,really, I have to say this is a great story.
However, I'm so angry about James.
I just hate him so much that it seems like all Severus's false.
hope one day Severus totally give up him and leave him.Or at least let Severus die early than him. He should suffer 10 times more and more and more and more!
anyway, I just hate James.
Phoenix-sophie
2009-10-09 . chapter 17
I hate James so much that I could not tell! This is extremely unequal! Severus should not be treated like that. There's no way James can get whatever he want without any giving in. I feel so sorry for severus.
Phoenix-sophie
2009-10-09 . chapter 14
I just cannot like James at all. He is such a coward! He likes Severus but dares not to tell anyone. He cannot even protect Severus. He peomises but he cannot do. He blame everything on Severus, that's not right at all! I hate him!! Poor Severus, he deserves the best, rather than a person who don't understand him.
schimelle
2009-09-30 . chapter 31
I read this story a few weeks ago over about four days, I was completely addicted and couldn't wait to get home from school to keep reading and now weeks later I'm still thinking about this story and will probably read it again after I finish my upcoming exams. I don't often review, (I know I suck) but I actually created an account just so I could review this story and say how much I love it. I think it's the best fanfic I've ever read, I really really loved it. I will write a better review when I reread it and it's fresher in my mind, but from memory I absolutely loved the pace and tension in snapes/james relationship and I loved James conflict between wanting to be Severus 'master' and wanting to just love him and be equals. Really well written, not too cliched like the majority of fanfics. Please update and finish this story! I NEED to read the rest of it!!
Zayroen
2009-09-20 . chapter 31
just brilliant, really. Its rare that you find a story with this coupling that actually is worth reading and more then just a shot of smut. When will the next chapter come? Though i did find the last one a little hard to read/understand
Zayroen
2009-09-18 . chapter 14
id feel guilty for not commenting..but im to busy pressing the next chapter button and waiting impatiently...>_>
Kia33
2009-09-10 . chapter 31
This story is absolutely amazing. I love it. This is probably the third or fourth time I've read it (in the past two-three months), and I still love it just as much as the first time.

Thank you so much for writing it and getting it translated.

Please, please write more and post it. I'd really love it if this story was finished. :D
roses in bloom
2009-08-17 . chapter 31
Oh tragedy! I absolutely *love* the parallels you are creating- a very nice touch. Can't wait to see how you continue this one!
benevolent-apocalypse
2009-07-16 . chapter 31
Please, oh please, oh please finish this! i've read it over six times now, and i really must have closure. this is one of the only intelligent stories i've read, and THE only decent James/Severus story.
Daninney
2009-07-06 . chapter 31
please, don´t stop writing... for me?
Koon
2009-06-30 . chapter 31
Oh, my gosh! Please don't stop writing this now, I read your fic whenever I could in -4 days!- It's superb *o* Write some more, please. x3 I'll wait patiently for your update.
Jew-ai
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
I'd love to read your other stories but alas I am a stupid American ... I don’t speak/read/write or understand German yet; but this gives me another reason (so I can read your stories) to learn faster
Jew-ai
2009-06-09 . chapter 2
I really really like this
I cant wait till u post more
-ur avid reader =^^=
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