 Hiei's Cute Girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 1Ah, the concept of the indirect kiss is fun. Clearly, most of my friends and I ignore it (four people -two guys and two girls- sharing one meal and one coke... ah, the joys of being a Scrooge).
XD I loved it! |
 PynkPlayar 2009-03-21 . chapter 1Really cute, sweet, and funny! An imaginative read! X3
The whole wetting pants part- haha, wow. No one could maintain their cool in that situation. No. one. Not Ryoma, not Tezuka, nobody!~ ^^
Keep writing! |
 CelestialxChaos 2008-07-15 . chapter 1xD i wonder how Ponta tastes like ^^ Good storyy |
 aterjsa 2008-06-08 . chapter 1it was kinda funny
what would ryoma actually do if he really did wet his pant not to mention also wetting the floor? *laughing out loud by my own imagination*
could he even maintain his cool if by any chance sakuno saw him and was laughing out loud?...or maybe just saw him in a very humiliating situation?
*giggles**snickers*
well anyways, i like the story
very well done...great fic |
 speadee 2008-04-08 . chapter 1Good lesson! I myself can't trust people, and never like to leave my food, drinks, or other belongings unattended. It's typical of some of those regulars to play pranks. However, wouldn't Captain Tezuka and Oishi stop them? AT least Echizen and Sakuno seemed happy with each other. |
 Lady-Von-Bielefeld 2007-12-29 . chapter 1aw:) kawaii! |
 FujixSaku0709 2007-12-08 . chapter 1kawai! haha |
 Bluementrit 2007-10-28 . chapter 1KAWAI |
 Aura Jade 2007-08-14 . chapter 1cute! |
 Melissax3 2007-01-16 . chapter 1HILARIOUS
(and adorable!)
that was really good
you should write something like that again |
 RAMEN-monster 2006-11-21 . chapter 1yu sed yu didnt mind capital letterz. so here goes. LMAOO!! IRT WUZ SOO FUNNY! KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK! |
 GoddessLD 2006-10-01 . chapter 1Haha! Aww so cute. |
 Stormyz 2006-07-29 . chapter 1lol that was so funny ^_^ poor sakuno and ryoma, hahaha |
 Cupid's Bride 2006-07-23 . chapter 1mou... keikeiaznqueen-san tara!
that was to short! i demand a sequel! or something!
it was good, though. |
 Pure Essence 2006-06-17 . chapter 1HAHA!! An indirect kiss! How sweet XD
Keep up the good work! |