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Hiei's Cute Girl
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Ah, the concept of the indirect kiss is fun. Clearly, most of my friends and I ignore it (four people -two guys and two girls- sharing one meal and one coke... ah, the joys of being a Scrooge).

XD I loved it!
PynkPlayar
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Really cute, sweet, and funny! An imaginative read! X3
The whole wetting pants part- haha, wow. No one could maintain their cool in that situation. No. one. Not Ryoma, not Tezuka, nobody!~ ^^
Keep writing!
CelestialxChaos
2008-07-15 . chapter 1
xD i wonder how Ponta tastes like ^^ Good storyy
aterjsa
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
it was kinda funny

what would ryoma actually do if he really did wet his pant not to mention also wetting the floor? *laughing out loud by my own imagination*

could he even maintain his cool if by any chance sakuno saw him and was laughing out loud?...or maybe just saw him in a very humiliating situation?

*giggles**snickers*

well anyways, i like the story

very well done...great fic
speadee
2008-04-08 . chapter 1
Good lesson! I myself can't trust people, and never like to leave my food, drinks, or other belongings unattended. It's typical of some of those regulars to play pranks. However, wouldn't Captain Tezuka and Oishi stop them? AT least Echizen and Sakuno seemed happy with each other.
Lady-Von-Bielefeld
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
aw:) kawaii!
FujixSaku0709
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
kawai! haha
Bluementrit
2007-10-28 . chapter 1
KAWAI
Aura Jade
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
cute!
Melissax3
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
HILARIOUS
(and adorable!)
that was really good
you should write something like that again
RAMEN-monster
2006-11-21 . chapter 1
yu sed yu didnt mind capital letterz. so here goes. LMAOO!! IRT WUZ SOO FUNNY! KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK!
GoddessLD
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
Haha! Aww so cute.
Stormyz
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
lol that was so funny ^_^ poor sakuno and ryoma, hahaha
Cupid's Bride
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
mou... keikeiaznqueen-san tara!

that was to short! i demand a sequel! or something!

it was good, though.
Pure Essence
2006-06-17 . chapter 1
HAHA!! An indirect kiss! How sweet XD

Keep up the good work!
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