I like the way you call it "your sun", "your wind", etc. Why do you change that in the last stanza?

that...was SO GOOD!! you should know that this is the first and probably only poem going on my favorites list!

love. so bittersweet. great writing.

That was so sad and sweet! I loved it!

Excellent stuff my friend!
It ws really great and you got out Rukia's feelings perfectly in it!
The language used was awesome and the rhyming came quick, fast and it flowed really well!
I agree with the below reviewer...Make a Bleach poem collection!
Keep up the great work Lysha!

Kya! I love it. It describes Rukia's feelings very well. I loved the words you used and the meaning of them. You should make a collection of Bleach poems. Well, bai bai~