Nice and adorable! In your fic, unlike some, the characters were acting like themselves, good job! *thumbs up*

Could ya please continue this, pretty please? *puppy eyes*

AAW! That was soo cute! Cloud was blushing, and aw...Great job with the story! ^__^

Nicely wrapped up. Well, I still can't think of any constructive criticism, so I'll just say good luck with your future stories.

This is a cute little clorith^^ Everything was nicely done, and all characters were in character, congrats to you^^

That was a really nice fic. I like that it was a hug and not a big kiss thing. It was the right situation for a hug and you did it justice by putting it in there. Going on my faves!

How cute! ^o^

Nice work.

this is kawaii ^^ is there any more chapter? he he

Not too shabby. I'll be on the fence for the next chapter. Good luck with your writing.

yeah i wanna know cloud pov he he put at my alert