I really enjoy this story; seeing how Rahirah, Vallaree and Doleera respond differently to each situation -- the training, Silara's reprimand, Kiriel's backing out, and the flight itself -- is great fun. Everyone's point of view is portrayed, and Doleera (for a change!) has a legitimate gripe at least in her eyes.We really need more stuff with female characters being the main focus!

^ ^ Wow! Very pretty! You have a way of writing a story like a painting. Really great job! Please write more in the future!