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| suzeebee 2006-10-25 ch 1,  | abuseAnother great one! but, you ARE going to add more right? Jordan can't be THAT foolish can she? I'm with the Goddess on this one. |
| Dana 2006-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseUpdate soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter... |
| rae1112 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseheh. heh heh. that was funny. are you serious? the end? come on! |
| GoddessofSnark 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseGrr...damn garret playing the role of El Blurto. Stupid stupid Jordan, why the hell would you walk out on THAT if THAT said he wanted you? Hell...what the hell has she been smoking ;) I like this and there should be more, there better be more... |
| garretelliot 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's the Imp of the Perverse, it hits me sometimes also. I'll be writing along and suddenly the Imp jumps up and changes my story. Either that or Jordan had something to say and went 'forget your plot, I'm going to talk.' I hope you'll see if there's more to this. I could see a full length fic coming from this scene. As always, I love your work; spare, but lyrical and packs a real wallop in a short piece. And this one is headed for Dr. Macy's Office |