Reviews for Naruto: Hyūga Prilgrimage

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Reader-of-Many 2008-08-13 ch 9,	abuseGreat story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Ryu-ken318 2008-08-06 ch 9,	abuseI love how i you didnt just make Naruto and Hinata instantly fall in love like some other authors do. I like the idea of konohamaru and hanabi-cant wait to see how it turns out-. This story rocked!
Yami Vizzini 2008-06-13 ch 9,	abuseWow, I finally got around to finishing this! And I'm going to read Edge of Tomorrow once I catch up with the other three Naruto fics I'm reading-.-;;. Seriously, though, good work. The characterization was basically perfect, and I'm always a sucker for cute romance (sure, in this case there are still some insecurities, but again, it's greater depth). I wonder, was the ninja pursuer mentioned near the beginning of chapter one of the missing-nin those Cloud ninjas hired, or what? Is this something you're going to touch on in EoT? (Maybe you shouldn't answer that- as I said, I have yet to start it.) Also, when does this take place, right after the timeskip (before Deidara captures Gaara)? And Naruto's FINALLY a chuunin! Awesome! I actually don't think I've seen him get promoted in a fic before (except at least one flash forward with him mentioned as Hokage).
Black X 2008-05-29 ch 9, anon.	abuseWow, you did a really good job so far, I hope you keep writing.:) Black X P.S. I would like to thank you for the good spelling and grammar.
Paosheep 2008-05-06 ch 9,	abuseI almost didn't review, because I was feeling lazy. Then I realized that that was a stupid reason. I really enjoyed this story. I liked how Naruto had grown wiser but not out of character, how you wrote Hinata's stammer the way a person might actually stammer, how the Hyuuga certainly seemed dysfunctional but also acted like a family, how the plot was both original and natural, and, last but not least, how the romance seemed more to sneak up on me rather than build up; I knew it was coming, but I never knew when. Over all, props to you. You made something pretty neat here.
continental-line 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuseHime does mean Princess but you HAD to part of the Imperial House. Noblepersons from the 7th son/daughter were banned from the line of succession by tradition. The daughters were married off to the advantage of the Clan. Daughters belonged to their fathers until they were married, then they belonged to their husband. The clans were founded by the 7th son or more, however, she daughter should be called -gozen, not -hime. Actually Hanabi comes off as a 'baka yaro' (stupid jerk). -Bill Ponder
RaiderXV 2008-04-01 ch 9,	abuseVery good story I enjoyed it immensely.
Buni-San 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseI read this story forever ago, and i just found it again! I've been looking for it everywhere! This is one of my FAVORATE naru/hina stories! I loved the ending!! You're the best!
demonbloodfeeder 2007-12-31 ch 9, anon.	abuseWHAT THE **! It's been over a damn year, almost two, since I've read this entire story and since then, I have yet to see a sequel. Surely it doesn't take this long to publish the first chapter of a story. DAMN!
Amsuhl 2007-12-31 ch 2,	abuseIt's ANBU, not ABNU. You spelt it wrong four times in a row, so I KNOW they're not typos. Anyways. Good fic. I like NaruHina.
Fionn the Otaku 2007-12-15 ch 2,	abuseGood chapter! I liked how you describe the Village and it's inhabitants. Another good part was Hinata's little history lesson. I also liked the little scenery/not that scenery joke.
Fionn the Otaku 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuseExcellant first chapter. I like how Naruto terrified those youn Genin. Another good part is the nature of the mission Naruto was requested for and that he is in command. I also like how Naruto dealt with Hinata and how Kakashi reacted to being infored that he was on time.
Kamina 2007-12-03 ch 9, anon.	abuseHey there Geor-sama I would just like to congratulate you on completing a very good fanfic, it had me hooked from start to end ( i even used most of my communications tech class time to read it) I am an avid reader and hope to see the sequel soon. Till then, Peirce Destiny like yesterdays enemies ~ Signed Kamina
Arhazivory 2007-11-05 ch 9,	abuseThat really was an adorable story. I loved how the relationship developed...it didn't just 'poof' and appeared, but the charater development was very good. I also like that Hanabi didn't magically become nice, but even at the end she still had many questions. It really was very well written, and quite adorable. Good job! :D
PhantasmagoricBlade 2007-10-15 ch 9,	abuse...hn. needs more fluff

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