 butterflymuppet 2008-09-21 . chapter 4ok I know this story was written ages ago but if you're still around I would recommend that you UPDATE please!
Seriously, I don't care if it's over 2 years old, it has so much potential and your writing style is really good =]! |
 Lrnd 2008-02-03 . chapter 4come back and write! this story has so much potential |
 Janelle Richard 2007-09-02 . chapter 4 i love this story,keep writing! |
 fussyrussy 2006-06-10 . chapter 4well done i really like this story
keep it up :) |
 TeahWeah 2006-06-07 . chapter 4This has been worth the wait.
I love Montague's denial at the beginning. It's adorable, in a twisted sort of way.
Other than that, the plot is brilliant. I nearly collapsed after reading it. |
 Rupert's honey 2006-02-04 . chapter 3Hm. Interesting. |
 Rupert's honey 2006-02-04 . chapter 2Hey I like this can't wait to read more. Siobhan is my real name. It so awesome to see it spelled right. Neway, good job. |
 angelface04 2006-02-01 . chapter 3i knew it. i knew it i knew it. i knew zabini was bad the moment he stepped into the story. poor angelina.
those tormenters sound rather nasty. i suppose we'll get a little taste of them later, eh?
anyway, great job so far (8 reviews? are you KIDDING me?!? you should have 800!)
update soon -
~angelface04~ |
 TeahWeah 2006-02-01 . chapter 3Your Montague sounds like one heck of a guy.
I feel so sorry for Angelina in this chapter. Poor girl. |
 Lrnd 2006-01-14 . chapter 2oh no ... love the build up |
 TeahWeah 2006-01-14 . chapter 2Suspense end to a chapter. You know how to keep your readers interested. =P
I love the part when Warrington made fun of Montague for staring at her in relation to "Quidditch".
Keep it up. =) |
 LongingforLlangarlia 2006-01-14 . chapter 2UGH! THE SUSPENSE! It's killing me now! But this was a great chapter and I can only guess where Angelina and Solan went. This is getting really good and you'd be crazy not to continue this. Keep it up and update soon! |
 angelface04 2006-01-06 . chapter 1i really did mean to review sooner. really. i swear. however, i got sidetracked and before you know it...
anyway, i was surprised to see this from you - though more than a little bit pleased. i was surprised to see that you started another chapter fic...i guess you had to get on on some of that montague bug going around, eh?
anyway, on to the actual story - i love how this has a PLOT (i'm good at avoiding those ^.^) and i couldn't keep my eyes off of the screen the whole time i was reading it. anyhow, my dad's just arrived (i'm at a friends house) and i must go - so with my lest few moments i beg of thee to update quickly - don't pull a real love on me and not update once every blue moon. ^.^
~angelface04~
p.s. speaking of blue, i love the title. |
 wayweird 2006-01-06 . chapter 1Can't wait to see why angelina left. good luck |
 TeahWeah 2006-01-06 . chapter 1Aww, poor Alicia and her seaweed dress.
Liking it so far. =) |