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Tinorial Peredhil
2006-01-06
ch 1,
abuseWow. Osgiliath? *whines* Mellon-nin... You. Are. Terrible! I hadn't expected THAT, mellon-nin! I thought it was JUST Faramir's thoughts! I hate you! Here I am, innocently reading Faramir's thoughts, and then you kick me while I'm down! Ugh.

FANTASTIC STORY! I loved it! Faramir angst-- does it GET better? Wonderful! You truly are a great author, mellon-nin!
Chibi-kaz
2006-01-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseNot bad. It would have been much better without the editorial comments. Were you trying to write an essay about Faramir or a story? It was hard to tell.
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