Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Check him out - Page 1 of 3
SnowLion no Miko
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
This was cute. I really enjoyed this little fic. It was very simple and sweet and really interesting. I laughed at parts and others just made me smile. Really nice fanfic! Sakura's subtle "crush" on Ino was nice, and I don't really read yuri. But this was so well written that I really loved this fic! Great work!
CeLlTab
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
OMG! O0O0H HOW I LOVE HOW THIS FIC ENDED!! EK!! XD sheesh you're such a great writer!! XD which means there's more fics to read of yours!! yay!!~

~animeaics
DreamShadower
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
That was nice, and Naruto really is oblivious to things around him. Hehe, Sakura so has a crush on Ino. :3 I liked it. Hehe, it's not surprising to see Ino gossipping about everyone either. And it's really great to see her eating fries, since that means she's not trying to diet. =3
fierymetis
2007-12-22 . chapter 1
Yes! I love this fic! It made me laugh so hard! I love how you managed to convey everything using only Sakura and Ino's commentary. The ending was perfect. Great job. *faves*
Heaven Cobra
2007-10-21 . chapter 1
that ROCKED.
taida
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
coot and adowible. and true. all hot boys are gay. or all gay boys are hot. im not sure which one...
SPS-kun
2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Wow, very good! I like the naturalness with which you suggested the goings-on, and Sakura and Ino's camaraderie. Very good UWU-fic, if I must say so myself.
Porporino the III
2007-04-10 . chapter 1
Firstly, and most importantly, I'm sorry. I had up until roughly a week and a half ago, read this story believing it to have been authored by that lying talentless hack of an author(like he even deserves to have that title) Kira Light on Adult fan fiction. I truly enjoyed it, and left a real true to the heart review for it.

Not that I am trying to severely pity you here, since you were able to catch that slimeball in the act, not to mention while he was pilfering the story of Ice-Puppet as well. After re-reading this story, on your own profile since that is how it was meant to be read, I leave you with the review you more than deserve.

This story kept me laughing, interested, and hungry for french fries. You did a seriously good job on it. Wow. Three people wanting not-so-little Naruto: Gaara, Sasuke (not too much of a surprise), and (even more obvious) Hinata-chan. I will definitely be keeping my eye out for more of your work. Hopefully, I can put all the other pains in life on hold long enough to enjoy them. Once again, I commend your ability to write such entertaining stories. Should you ever care to chat drop me a line, and I will be happy to reply. If not, then I bid you farewell, and hope you remain in good health. Take care!
hinatafan180
2007-04-09 . chapter 1
this was so funny! i luv it!
Kohaku Hoshi
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
I like it, chibi! XD
silversbreath
2007-03-27 . chapter 1
i luved this cuz i can toatlly see it happening, but excuse me, r u a boy or a girl? i like to know... im odd1! all the ppl in my fav authors r girls, so i want to see if im about to get a first boy author in there (scratch that Loyalty is a guy, but hey, hes my bro so that dont count)

im just curious!! no boy dicrimination!! trust me, i luv guys!!
someone
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
At least Tenten, Neji, Lee and Hinata aren't gay...
Flibber T. Gibbet
2007-01-09 . chapter 1
This fic was wonderful. Really unique and didn't make me want to strangle any of the characters... XD Cheers to a job a well done!
FlamencoPenguin
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
This is one of my favorite fics for this fandom. I just love the easy-going relationship between Sakura and Ino. They talk to each other like I talk to my friends (minus the inherent attraction) and it is so nice to find a fic like that. Sakura is very cute as she stumbles around her crush on Ino, but their gossiping truly steals ceter stage - Ino is as blunt and funny as ever.

Thank you for writing and for sharing! Take care!
Kimiko Li
2006-08-03 . chapter 1
tehe this was cute!

it's going into my favorite stories list g.
Return to Top