the last two lines of that were beautiful
loved it

Wow!

That was GREAT!

oh this is perfect!! love it!!

i like it.. thank you

Slightly improbable perhaps, but tender and lots of fun.

I LOVED IT!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
IT WOULD REALLY BE GOOD IF IT ONLY HAPPENED ON THE SHOW

Your writing is beautiful,I only have a comment on the content:It was really perfect till the shower in Grissom's room.After that I wasn't so taken away with it as I was before.I think I didnt expect Sara to burst out since she was kind of passive earlier.I understand though that if Sara didnt talk and of course Grissom had less chances to do that how could you bring them together?
I only say this because I think you are really talented and I really hope you write more for Grissom and Sara

This was a very well written story. I loved it. I understand your rain dilema. I live in BC, just North of you, and we were one day away from tying the record for rain in consecutive days.
Again, beautiful story.

how sweet! i loved it! and the ending was good too, tho as you were i was thinking it left plenty of room for a possible sequel. or not. this fic stood well on its own, keep up the great writing!

"That was kickass" (in complete jock voice, for kicks..)

I'm breathless!
fantastic!

That was good-thanks for not dragging it out or
having Gris back down after saying ILY!

A very hot, sweet fic-thanks for the tuck-in story!

I really enjoyed this story. You took an old idea and made a really fresh piece of work out of it. I am a sucker for the motel room scenerio and this one was great.

Absolutely beautiful writing. Fun story idea with believable resolution. Nicely done!

Lovely work! Looking forward to more from you!