FINALLY! I have been waiting for this story for so long. Worth it though. I want to see if Serenity is creative in ditching Duke.

Hi, me again!
And another storie I've been waiting for ages to update. The second chapter was quite short, and I' quite sure it wasn't there before.
As for the third one, it's brilliant. Congratulations!
Oh, and maybe you could try to make short notes on what happens in your plot, then you won't have problems forgetting.
Bye,
SP

Sounds funny, go on!!

that's a cool story idea, i hope you finnish it!

1. When you beg for review, it makes you look very childish for one thing. The reviews will come as naturally as the chapter itself.

2. This could have been much better, I think you rushed the premise of this fic with the first chapter. nd if you're planning on switching POV's, DON'T do it unless you know what you're doing.

Not a bad idea for a S x S fic, but it needs work.

WOW! kool fic Ema! when are u going to update? plz mke it soon and update ur other fics too plz *chibi eyes* is the final pairing going to be SetoxSerenity? i know u have a thing for that couple lol. anyways, see u at school hun. Bai ^o^

Nice hooker. Here's your first review.