Another story that was MUCH too pat! I'm sorry! :-(

an interesting idea, but once again you seem to hasten through it, cutting short every new thought, every dialogue and every descriptive scene to the absolute minimum it still stays understandable. On the first look that might seem to be economic and the best use of space and words, but... a story never is purely the communication of prepared information so both sides share the same knowledge, it is always partially a transfer of emotions, a sharing of thoughts and the reliving of developments and all these aspects fall quite a bit short when you go and put everything under the razor as seems to be your style.

Just relax, let the characters slip out of your grip a little bit, let them... LIVE .. and do stuff that's not 100 percent ergonomic but gives the story a more natural feeling a more natural speed of happenings and your stories will quite surely be lifted from purely enjoyable to more than excellent!

Different...*smirks* Harry Potter and The Ride of the Valkyries/Harry Potter and The Handmaidens of Odin I tried to google that title (previous) and came up with yours-go figure. Yours is a wonderful little fic and I fully intend to read the sequel, but I was kinda hoping to find the DLP story I'd read part of it and lost the url, and now I can't find it. :'( any help?

It would be awesome to see a update on this story. I would like to find out what happens next even if it was just another one shot, it would still be great.

Cel

Great story, I really liked the mix of HP and mythology.

Love it!

great story can't wait to find out what happens next please update as soon as you can thanks for writiing a great story

LOL... though M-Rated Romance indicates possible lemony goodness!

Interesting. I would have to say that sometimes it is good to be Harry (no punn intended).

This is wonderful, you are a genius. DH has nothing on your writing.

Cool and thanks for writing.

Sweet another Masterpeice my Friend, I DO WANT MORE!

Also I'm in the Planing stages of my fic, I want to Know IF you'd BETA my fic,

Harry Potter: And the Heir of the Founders 4!

Summery- In his 1st Year 13 year old Harry came out of the restroom at Kings Cross Platforms 9 3/4, and saw a girl on her knees, crying over her books, he picked them up & gave then to her, it was love at 1st sight, "Hi I'm Harry Potter." "Hello I'm Hermione Granger." They board the train arm in arm, & head to HogWarts to begin their lives anew, also Who is Tommas R. Malfoy and why does Draco HATE him so badly. I will do most of years 1-6 maybe some parts of 7. Also Harry is the 100x Grandson of the Founders 4, & Harry 6 others will be Animagi & many more powerful things.

Thanks, Later.

Primus2021

i hate it sorry but what the hell ew only one girl for one guy and vice versa would have been great if it was just a hemione and harry fic

What a great story, I like how Daphne handled Minister of Magic... I wish you done the story before this to explain things better.

Another cute, light-hearted Happy Harry story. Thank you very much.