This is a truly wonderful and beautiful story (poetry?). :D

Short, simple, but amazing.

I really love it! :D

oh! i love it! :D

great job! just the right amount of SasuSaku fluff! :D

-purplesmiley-

It was good but. . . What happened at the ending? Hm. . . Just wondering. But all in all it was awesome!

Write more!

Godspeed!

inkblots.

Acculy there is nothing wrong with it and I really loves it... I know you're going to come long one day. Thanks for the writing.

*cries*

It. Was. Beautiful.

;-;

*sobs*

I loved the poems at the end and beginning

:)

Amazing.

that was awesome! wow... i'm honestly blown away!

Its beautiful.

This is a very good story. Is this really your first attempt? Well, I for one, am really surprised.

nice intro you blended the storie with a nice powem and the powam caught all thar acts of both of them. though it is viey trough sakura is like an angle and sasuke is like a devol and both vame to konoha abnd both are so diferent that they cdoud nivetr be together or are will they two apasets can be so alike even they seem so different youll be saparised how things can end in stories.

but othet thin that the begineg is very interesting it maks you want to read on and who ever wrote the powem is very talente in geting both sids of two totoly defferent people and make thim seem to bbe ment for eadch other

Brilliant. Very nice views, I especially liked the ending text.

This was really unique and unconventional in a good way. I can tell just from this short piece that you really have a way with words. I loved the style of this one-shot and enjoyed how you blended poetic material with the rest of the plot. Great job and good luck with future fics!

Take care,

Sasukelove2

Love the story.

wow that was good. great job

I loved that. It was...just...

I don't know the word. Brilliant? Amazing?

-curses- kuso...I need a thesaurus.

KK

nice poem