ACK! The suspence! Poor Danny...Jack and Maddie must feel horriable. you MUST update soon!

excellent story.

Oh no! They know...

go Jazz for being protective...

Poor Danny. Poor, poor Danny.

What's going to happen now?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I..just..wow. It's...wow. It's really really REALLY good, I felt as though my heart was doing backflips all through it! You can really feel what Danny was going through. I hope you'll write more, cause I'm at the edge of my seat!

Great story so far!

Onward!

Poor Danny...

hi person,...words can't describe this story...i actually FELT what Danny felt during this story, his pain, suffering, fear...all in one, and in the end...i was crying like a BABY...i've NEVER seen anyone do a story like this that WELL, so applause to u my friend *claps*

Allison

update soon i really like this

...OMG! that's, that's ACK! Poor Danny! Goodness, what's going to happen to him now? But that was so well written! I could really see it as you described it, it felt like I was there! You're so good! Keep writing and update soon, I love it! :D :P

That was so sad.

Nice!

This was really good. I like it so much.

KatrinaKaiba

Oh. My. God.

That was a heartwrenking chapter. I even cried a little.

I can not wait to read more.

Brillant. Really Brilliant.

*crying* omg poor danny! i hope you update i wanna see what happens!

That was great.

Well... no. Actually it was horrible (what happened to Danny, I mean). I hope you update soon.

Good start! Keep it up!