This is absolutely wonderful.

good work with this..!


HawkAngel

Wow, that was an AWESOME ending! I loved how Wally asked Kyle at the end if he needed the couch. XD Too bad you didn't make them still alive, but it was still great. You should totally make a sequel!

Wow, that was really exciting. When is Wally going to actually call Linda back? When is he going to forgive poor Kyle? And who exactly is Supergirl dating? Yes, I'm a curious type of person, aren't I? :)

Oh, poor Wally. *sniffles sadly* I know they're still alive, I just KNOW it!

This. Story. Is. AWESOME!
I love the way that you've written all the characters, especially Kyle. I thought that I would pass out with a fit of giggles when everyone kept telling him 'go see J'onn or Mr. Terrific', then wandering off and not telling him who they were. XD LOL :) Also, I liked how Question discovered Kyle asleep in the elevator, and the emotions over Hawkgirl's Metamorphos's, and John's deaths. Like with Flash for example. Poor guy. He lost his best friend. *sniffles* I'm SO adding this to my favorite stories list!

I liked that you didn't enclude what Shayera and John's conversation was. It's better that you kind of fill it in yourself. Poor Vixen. Great job!

Good Job. Bravo. WO!

-kobez-

that is really really good.
i do mean it.
the ending is perfect.

That was an amazing story. The ending almost made me cry. You write so well. Thank you.

5 stars! You should have written for the show. :)

That´s really a fantastic story! It´s great that you let the characters suffer on their own different way. You did a great job!

Decided to reread this today. Is it cartoon-canon that Kyle Rayner had worked for the Planet before becoming a GL, or is that something you added for this fic?

u should have an epolgue, & mayb another story telling what really happened w. HG/GL, supposing it was a time-portal-thingie

Wow. I really loved this. The pacing was great, the characters were spot on (to me, anyway). I enjoy all your stories, and this was no exception. Great work!