That was...just...awesome...so freaking AWESOME!

So short... yet so sad.

That was really good!

wow

I like seeing Hinata through he father's eyes. I guess he just pushed her so much that he eventually pushed her away.

The characterization was very nice. You capture a good Hiashi, I think. :)

I hope you don't mind me adding this to my C2

that ex[plain quite a bit. Hiashi mmy be pushing down on his daughter be cause he wants her a child.

LOVED THE STORY.

A wonderful Naru/Hina fiction and an interesting view on Hiashi. Very sweet romance (though Naruto never shows up) and the reconciliation is nice too.