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I. Mushi
2009-12-07 . chapter 19
I just read the whole story in one go, and it was absolutely beautiful. Your characterization of Sesshomaru was really deep and insightful, and the power behind many of his and Kagome's conversations lingers. Truly beautiful. It's rare to find stories on that are this serious and wonderful, and that leave you with that feeling of a kind of muted happiness--tinged with a little dose of reality. Great job.

- mushi
sesshylover:)
2009-11-25 . chapter 4
awsome but did you really have to cut his awsome hair off :'(
nevershoutbribri
2009-09-26 . chapter 19
It took me a while, but I finally finished it!
I found this story in someone's favorites, saw it was marked as complete and thought "Why not?" And took a look.

I. WAS. HOOKED.

It was an amazing story!
I absolutely adored it. :)

Sesshomaru/Kagome is actually one of my favorite couples.

Favorited.
QAM-Andy
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
Why would Kagome need a gun? Its a crime, I tell you, just like giving Sonic a gun..
psychocitten
2009-08-02 . chapter 19
wow. I just have to say the story was beautiful.
that sentence right after sesshomaru kissed kagome was just... wow, words can't discribe. he had kissed snow.
Kanna37
2009-07-21 . chapter 19
I have to say that this story had definite differences to most, you handled the, shall I say, triteness that so many Sess/Kag stories devolve into with grace, and your take on the Inu/Kag relationship was certainly new, and thus, interesting. I bow to you.

Amber
-CALY-GIRl-
2009-07-15 . chapter 19
good story. it is one of the few angtsy ones that i liked. it is different, but more like a good different.
megan
2009-07-09 . chapter 10
I love this part because in the end she end up realizing that she loved him but was not destined for them to be together. If kagome didn't end up with Inuasha in the real series then this i how i would have chosen for in to end!...
Rayne Hunter
2009-04-15 . chapter 19
My favorite scene in this story was where Sess was telling Souta a story.
Sloths-r-cool-shut-up
2009-03-05 . chapter 19
This story was very well written and contained a lot of depth. I think it's really different and has a lot of conceptual understanding and complex ideas. Really good job. kind of made me sad though, but in a good way.
demon's purity
2009-02-21 . chapter 19
aw that was so..so lovely. i cant think of a better word. a very lovely story! good job!:)
Shayleatone
2008-12-14 . chapter 19
I completely enjoyed this story watching the relationship grow. loved it.
fiery frost
2008-10-15 . chapter 19
I absolutely loved and adored the way you wrote this story. Especially how you wrote Sesshoumaru being brought back into the stream of time, of feeling and of life and death. And there are so many pretty phrasings that I wanted to squee over.
Thank you so much for writing this!
knifethrower
2008-08-08 . chapter 19
This is beautiful. Are you still writing? I hope so.
inuyasha's lil sister
2008-08-07 . chapter 15
i absolutely loved the sesshoumaru/souta scene
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