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lia marou
2008-05-24 . chapter 17
What a wonderful story!Loved it!
Reading the scene at the hospital with Jack fighting the nurses I remember the similar scene in ''A bend in the road'.Needless
to say that I prefer your version!
And the end with Sam waiting for him at home,why they didn't give us a scene like this on T.V.?
I can't wait for your next story!
Mishelle20
2007-11-26 . chapter 17
I loved this fic and the ending definately left me smiling. Amazing job!
Vere
2007-01-20 . chapter 17
Amzing!! Love it!
Moriel21
2006-09-11 . chapter 17
Okay seriously...you gotta stop making me cry! (Okay maybe not really cuz it means your writing is that touching...but still!
This line...
"He smiled as much as his wounds would allow and said softly, “Ooh here.”
Yeah...tears totally welled up! Gah, so very touching and sweet and just happy! Here he thought his heart was breaking and instead he finds her waiting for him and wanting him the whole time, it's perfect!
I adore this story seriously...you are awesome! Just yeah wow...can't find the words...awesome!
Moriel21
2006-09-11 . chapter 16
"He nodded, “Shpressing my undying wub makes me sheepy.”

Okay that is the cutest line ever! Wow so dang cute and sweet...I loved that!:)
Moriel21
2006-09-11 . chapter 15
"Manly man arms made for holding and protecting a woman..." yeah totally with ya on that! No wimpy wormy arms...gotta have the manly arms, all the way!
And Sam yelling "Babe..!" LOVED that! No more hiding it I guess...not like she could at this point anyway...but still...lol, nice!:)
Moriel21
2006-09-11 . chapter 13
"Mrs. Malone" aw, yay I bet Sam's wanted to be called that for awhile now! Cute;)
Moriel21
2006-09-11 . chapter 11
"The influence she had at that moment to soothe him moved her deeply and she felt a confident calm wash over her. It seemed at that very moment she knew beyond a shadow of a doubt that she and Jack would never be apart again."
Favorite line of the chapter...I love it...just yeah...love it...(little at a loss for words!;)
Moriel21
2006-09-11 . chapter 10
Oh wow honey! This story has completely captivated me! I've been reading it non-stop and was just gonna review it at the end, cuz I couldn't stop...but I read this chapter and just had to comment! I swear you had me in tears after the last chapter and then this one on top it...good grief!;) There are so many lines that were so very touching and brilliant and so heart wrenching...I seriously was reading with tears in my eyes!
But I loved this one especially...
"The doctor and nurses watched in awe at the instant transformation of their patient from an extremely agitated and scared man to a calm and docile one - all from the voice and touch of this woman."
Now that...in one line...is the power of love...that's it perfectly! This is an amazing story, I am loving it...:)
serataja
2006-04-09 . chapter 17
What a great ending! I loved the bit of angst at the start and the nice surprise when he came home. That was perfect. Now, you've done a wonderful job on this story, so take a break, but please don't stop writing forever. I hope you'll get another story idea, soon.
serataja
2006-04-09 . chapter 16
Ah, wonderful!
My favorite line: "Shpressing my undying wub makes me sheepy."
This is incredibly sweet and touching.
makemyday
2006-04-05 . chapter 17
Lovely, sweet J/S story. But as you won't do the 'sponge bath,' I'll just have to imagine it in my head!! Hope you have some more J/S stories up your sleeve.
Purgurl
2006-04-03 . chapter 17
Hey sorry i havnt reviewed the last 2 chapters my computer went on meltdown. This was a fantastic end to a fantastic story. I really did think that Sam wasnt gonna be there but then agian it is Sam so she had to be. I loved when she said 'I wub you too' that was the sweetest and greatest way to end the story. I WUBBED it!!Thankyou soo much for one of the greatest J/S stories out there!! Feel free to write again anytime soon...like in one day ...or 5 minutes . Ill be waiting.
Sammy-Girl001
2006-04-03 . chapter 17
So sorry I haven't reviewed to the last two chapters, but I'm back now, even if it is just to say how much I adored this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
jjbird
2006-04-02 . chapter 17
Oh good Lord, I think I coughed up my skull I was laughing so hard at that wee reference!... Thanks for that JoS, it has been fun, and shippy, and squishy... :)
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