Reviews for Raven vs Starfire

Reviews For: Raven vs Starfire

Canaan Walker 2006-12-10 ch 2, anon.	abusethis is so well put together! quick! UPDATE! ASAP! I ned to know who wins! hit me back!
demente 2006-05-13 ch 2, anon.	abuseoh!, please make a quick update! please please!
Mizuki hikari 2006-02-23 ch 2,	abusecontinue ^.^
hhgbh 2006-02-23 ch 2,	abuseWell, in all honesty, I didn't think it was quite as good as the first chapter. Seemed a little rushed in comparison. What's with the big gaps in the text? So now the fighting starts. Place your bets. It's clear that Slade has given Raven someone else's memories, and someone who doesn't like Starfire fo that matter. I can't remember anyone ever referring to her as 'Red', so it might be someone we don't know. Anyway, the way things are; Raven won't be holding back any, while Starfire's love for her friend might keep her from using her full power. That is, unless her warrior instincts kick in again. Let's see how things go in the next chapter. Even though it's a fight scene, I'd still like to some of the characterization you showed in the previous chapter, such as Star's thoughts and feelings as she is forced to battle Raven.
acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-02-23 ch 2,	abuseWonderful story. Very descriptive fight scenes. And cool scenes with chasing Slade. In a fight, Star obviously has a good advantage in short-range combat, but, give Rae some space, and she'll send the alien back to Tamaran. Keep the good writing.
paprika90 2006-02-23 ch 2,	abusevery very interesting! i honestly was not sure about this fanfic and assumed it to be like others but you have definatley proved me wrong! :-) i like how you have kept the characters in character and npt at all ooc. the way you are building up to the main plot is really good. like the cliffhanger btw! hey, will there be any pairings in this fanfic? or just a general story between frinds and such? enjoying the story so far and cant wait till you update!! ^_^
hhgbh 2006-01-12 ch 1,	abuseWoah! How'd I miss this? This is way better than I first thought it would be. It's not just a 'fight story'. It's also looking at the relationship between two characters. You've done their personalities great. And your general writing and story telling is very good as well. I gotta say, Raven's very brave! I sure as heck wouldn't want to spar against Starfire. I can also understand how Star went a bit overboard. She is from a race of warriors and in the heat of a fight (even a practice one) it's easy to lose yourself. Idid think it was pretty funny how she was asking Raven to hit her to make up for it. (I've actually done that a couple of times myself.) Really looking forward to the next chapter.
funvince 2006-01-07 ch 1,	abuseThe premise of the story seems intriguing, but I'll say more when the plot really starts. Your description of fight scenes are well-written and you're writing the characters of Raven and Starfire quite well. I like how you have set up their friendship and am interested in seeing how you test it.

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