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Reviews For: Our Farewell

ddtrunks77
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseYou have to mke a sequell...please!!You can't leave Bakura...where ever he is!!
This is good!and the idea is jist what would explain the hole Zork thing in the series...because otherwise it really makes no sence if you actually think about it.
But I refuse to acsept Bakura...The Thief King is actually gone...
Now I'm depressed...you made me cry most of the las half...well all the last half...and I don't want to hate Atemu but I do have grudge aginst all the others who never even bothered to think of why The Tief King did what he did ...'walk a mile on his shoes' you know.I particularly hate Anzu!
Is there even a way to save the thief thing you think?If there was something that could be done...what would it be?
lotus head
2007-03-16
ch 1,
abuseThis story is amazing! (and here I am revewing for a two year old story. XD) The plot is actually kind of simple, but it's well thought out and doesn't get boring at all even though it's such a long fic. I love how Ryou turns so evil, and everything seems pretty realistic to me. The ending is terrific, though, because it leaves a wonderful sense of forboding. Makes me want to look out the window and make sure Ryou hasn't taken over the world yet. :D
Maiko-Akatsuki-Ninja
2006-12-18
ch 1,
abuseOh Ryou!! Im so proud of you and so is Bakura. I should know. Show that miget. Malik was deprived of that privalege for to long! Nice touch with Honda and Anzu. A sequel would be sweet. Please do one.
Kayzo
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abusethat was the best one-shot ive ever read!i love how Ryou and Malik team up to kill Anzu and tristen! and hurt the spiky haired miget
The neko jin
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseO_O... O_O... O_o woa nice... im speechless it was SO goos! good cant describe it! it surprises me that u only have 8 other rewiews... well 9 now ^^

I like your way on showing Ryou as the next evil one... and malik.. brr i really like his knives :P u portray him as i have always thouht of him!

god that was good best yu-gi-oh fic i have ever read! and i mean it make a sequel or something just... make more
ladygodess
2006-04-02
ch 1,
abuseBoy Ryou can play the part of evil well when it's written well, ^.~ anyway i loved the oneshot great job, i even loved how you put Malik in there to help out Ryou, well bye for now.
Chi-chan Lurks
2006-03-27
ch 1,
abuseoohs I remember this fic... actualy, then end part of it when Yugi was getting his arse wooped is what I remember... I don't remember this first part though
counted-among-the-confused
2006-03-26
ch 1,
abusewow...that has got to be the best story i've ever read! wow...you should make a sequel or...sumthin'.iono. well arsum story. great job. and what not. whatev
Cloaked Vampire
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseVery nice story here, very nice indeed... I loved how you portrayed Ryou as 'the next great evil they never saw coming' ...excellant. What more can be said? I liked it a lot.
Itavita
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseWow, really liked the interraction between Ryou and Bakura in this fic. I also liked that at the end Ryou is on the other end of the innocent spectrum. He's no angel.

Very dark and very well written. Excellent job!
Andyouthinkimcrazy
2006-01-20
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, that was wonderful. I only wish that Bakura hadn't been taken away from poor little Ryou.
Travelling Reviewer
2006-01-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's well written...but I can't believe a single word of it. Sorry. I can't believe Ryou and Malik would be that selfish and self-centered. Not after Ryou *died* to save them all, not after Malik defeated his other *himself*.

I know you said it was an AU. I still can't believe it.
fallen-angel-of-repression
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abusei dont know what you had to do for the contests, but let me just say one thing.

wow.

i am floored. i, i cant even begin to describe it. there was such emotion and development. there wasnt anything that seemed like it shouldnt be in there. there wasnt an odd sentence. it was wonderful. i love how everything fit so well with the actual plot of the story. and i love how Zork and bakura are different people. the ending... well, the ending cauight me off guard, but it was still powerful and awe-inspiring.

thank you so much for sharing this!
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