Technically it's okay. But the material you chose and the story-bleah. BLEAH.

You can do better than this.

This rocked. I loved it
i didn't think anyone else had this idea.
to quote the last words of Ravage,"DECEPTICONS FOREVER!"

s much as i love Evangelion, The Transformers will always be my favourite cartoon robots, and its nice to see the Eva's aren't invincable

I just baout died laughing my ass off with this story.

Even though it had a tragic ending, the thought of the

story was just hilarious.

Oh please! Shinji could SO kick more ass than that! What about those

frickin' wings? And the AT-Field? And-and-and the EVA's are just

cooler! I demand a rematch! Creative license be damned! Meagtron

is SO a greasy stain on the sidewalk! And Prime! How could Prime die?

What's up with that! - But in all seriousness, I really enjoyed

the story. Admittedly I couldn't help but laugh, but I thought it was

well-written and the characters were sorta IC. But if Asuka could whip

9 MP Eva's, a few Decepticons would've been a picnic! Thanks for the laugh!