Reviews for The Ultimate Betrayal

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Carly Anderson 2008-07-25 ch 2,	abusethat sucks for the Joker. He's my favorite character, and i think that harley is a dipshit for doing that to him. (i LOVE the Joker. he is my absoloute favorite charactor from, basically anything...) this was pretty awsome, no really awsome! Wolfstar
Koschei966 2008-07-21 ch 2,	abusei loved this fic! :D:D:D very nice, i could point out the bits i liked but i'd end up just quoting the whole fic :D
WriterofStrangeThings 2008-07-09 ch 2,	abuseI burst into giggles when Mistah J said "Sorry, Mom" to Dr. Joan. I loved that line. Actually, I love the entire story.
GothamCity.Harlequin 2008-02-22 ch 2,	abuseClever. I enjoyed it.
princessebee 2008-01-08 ch 2,	abusePURS. I'm loving this! I really have conflicted feelings about that scene in Harley's Holiday; on one hand it's Harley being cute and mischevious, on the other NO WAY! I love that you went into how she might react once it had settled in. I'm a sex worker and object to the term 'whore' being used as an insult, but it might be in keeping with Mistah J's character. I guess one thing to remember is that Harley is not afraid to use her sexuality to get what she wants; actions that are condemned by many. Personally, I like that about her, it's almost a form of sex work in itself. Lots of golden moments in this fic. LOVE the conversation between the two doctors and the analysis of their relationship. You're right, there are lots of similarities between our two approaches (not sure I could manage the lighter stuff with as much panache though!). Favourite bits: All he could do was laugh, changing Harv’s smirk to a sneer as the guards pulled him away. If he was trying to get to him, he was going to have to try a lot harder than that. No one knew Harley better than him. She’d be back. She always came back and there’s nothing the Bat or these quacks can do about it. In fact, he loved it when she tried to rebuild her old life. It only proved how much power he had when it all came tumbling back down. YES! hehehe She started out trying to heal him, but, in reality, Harley only feeds his mania by feeding his ego. Hell, he’s probably gotten sicker because of her. This sent him into hysterics. “Harley is very upset.” “You were at the top of your class, I can tell.” He’d never be rid of her. His mind raced. Wasn’t that because he always allowed her to stay, though? After all, if the Joker wants someone gone, he just gets rid of them doesn’t he? No no! Don’t go down that train of thought; you never like where you end up. Yes,Joker,don't go that way. You really won't like it. hehehe.:)
Kichi 2007-11-05 ch 2,	abusenice
Tiera-Tarie 2007-07-17 ch 2,	abusegood read and it had some funny parts too.
hi 2006-12-12 ch 2, anon.	abuselol, gr8 story. it keeps making me think of like if the joker saw harley hugging-kissing batman, lololol a story like that would be hilarious. just what would he be thinking if he saw that?? LOL. i dunno i just think it's hilarious. sumbody write it! plz. lol. please sum1 write it! ha ha
QueenCaroline 2006-11-26 ch 2,	abuseThis rocks! Plz do more!
Saint Morse 2006-04-20 ch 2,	abusebrilliant. i love you for writing this. please, have a cookie. have two cookies. and write more stories so i can get my yayas.
WittyFae 2006-03-04 ch 2,	abuseNow you've done it. Now not only do I have to add THIS amazing story to favorites, but I have to add you to author alert too because I want to be made aware if you ever write another fic in this genre. Curse you! You really have their relationship down and it is everything is should be: humorous, heartbreaking and chilling. I hope you write again soon!
SilenceNights 2006-01-25 ch 2,	abuseWow. that was so awesome.
Pepper Keibu 2006-01-13 ch 2,	abuseI was on the edge of my seat as Harley struggled to confess. Everytime I watch 'Harley's Holiday' I wonder how the Joker would react.. and now I know! You UNDERSTAND these characters. and you'd better keep writing, or i'll beat you unconscious with my shoe! laughs =D You should continue this! Well, either way, keep up the great work! If Harley's Holiday was a two parter, THIS is exactly how i'd want it!
Xeero 2006-01-12 ch 2,	abusewow, that was pretty weird. I liked this Chapt. but not as much as the first 1, but overall it's still a nice read. One question, tho: how was Joker able to go to the costume/trophy room with no guard in site? eh, well, I'll read the next chapter for sure.
Xeero 2006-01-12 ch 1,	abuseSo far, I'm enjoying. I do wonder what it is exactly that's going on, I can't wait to find out. Your writing is pretty intrigueing and keeps you hooked, and I laughed how you made Joker beat Ivy unconsious with his shoe. Just the way you presented it was just darn plain hilarious. oh, nice that you featured my fav character (Two-Face) ;). Joker's featured in mine, see what you think of my story.

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