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vertigeaux
2009-03-29 . chapter 2
The first chapter had me laughing hysterically. Couples counseling?! Brilliant!
NamulaMoonshine
2009-03-23 . chapter 2
Love it! And that was like my favorite episode!
MacAttack5
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Oh Harley! Poor Harley. Can't wait to see what he does to make her pay, with the Joker its never simple. Great job, update soon please!
harleyQdoll
2008-09-22 . chapter 2
wow!
LOL i love joker
soo funny and clever :] heehee
your brilliant for this fic
i pictured the events going on
as if it was a comic...which is fun

:]
MochaCocaFan
2008-08-09 . chapter 2
Great prelude!
Cara Lea
2008-07-25 . chapter 2
that sucks for the Joker. He's my favorite character, and i think that harley is a dipshit for doing that to him. (i LOVE the Joker. he is my absoloute favorite charactor from, basically anything...) this was pretty awsome, no really awsome!

Wolfstar
Koschei966
2008-07-21 . chapter 2
i loved this fic! :D:D:D very nice, i could point out the bits i liked but i'd end up just quoting the whole fic :D
KylaRyan
2008-07-09 . chapter 2
I burst into giggles when Mistah J said "Sorry, Mom" to Dr. Joan. I loved that line.
Actually, I love the entire story.
GothamCity.Harlequin
2008-02-22 . chapter 2
Clever.
I enjoyed it.
princessebee
2008-01-08 . chapter 2
PURS.
I'm loving this!
I really have conflicted feelings about that scene in Harley's Holiday; on one hand it's Harley being cute and mischevious, on the other NO WAY!
I love that you went into how she might react once it had settled in.
I'm a sex worker and object to the term 'whore' being used as an insult, but it might be in keeping with Mistah J's character. I guess one thing to remember is that Harley is not afraid to use her sexuality to get what she wants; actions that are condemned by many. Personally, I like that about her, it's almost a form of sex work in itself.

Lots of golden moments in this fic. LOVE the conversation between the two doctors and the analysis of their relationship. You're right, there are lots of similarities between our two approaches (not sure I could manage the lighter stuff with as much panache though!).
Favourite bits:
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All he could do was laugh, changing Harv’s smirk to a sneer as the guards pulled him away. If he was trying to get to him, he was going to have to try a lot harder than that. No one knew Harley better than him. She’d be back. She always came back and there’s nothing the Bat or these quacks can do about it. In fact, he loved it when she tried to rebuild her old life. It only proved how much power he had when it all came tumbling back down.

YES! hehehe
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She started out trying to heal him, but, in reality, Harley only feeds his mania by feeding his ego. Hell, he’s probably gotten sicker because of her. This sent him into hysterics.
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“Harley is very upset.”
“You were at the top of your class, I can tell.”

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He’d never be rid of her. His mind raced. Wasn’t that because he always allowed her to stay, though? After all, if the Joker wants someone gone, he just gets rid of them doesn’t he? No no! Don’t go down that train of thought; you never like where you end up.

Yes,Joker,don't go that way. You really won't like it. hehehe.:)
Kichi
2007-11-05 . chapter 2
nice
Tiera-Tarie
2007-07-17 . chapter 2
good read and it had some funny parts too.
hi
2006-12-12 . chapter 2
lol, gr8 story. it keeps making me think of like if the joker saw harley hugging-kissing batman, lololol a story like that would be hilarious. just what would he be thinking if he saw that?? LOL. i dunno i just think it's hilarious. sumbody write it! plz. lol. please sum1 write it! ha ha
QueenCaroline
2006-11-26 . chapter 2
This rocks! Plz do more!
Orange Seltzer
2006-04-20 . chapter 2
brilliant. i love you for writing this. please, have a cookie. have two cookies. and write more stories so i can get my yayas.
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