Oh, OW. Nice.

I LOVE IT. This is a very short but very sweet fiction. The description was beautiful, great use of imagery..it was excellent all around. You're EXTREMELY talented. Great job. _

BTW, I also love the content. _ There has got to be more fics that portray Hojo as less wicked, since he MUST have another side...somewhere. Heh-heh. Anyways, keep up the awesome work. _

Uwaaaoooo! Wow! Short, but very sweet and stirring. Very deep and conveys the emotions of the narrator quite well. Good! I like the story the way it is...there's no real need to add or change the ending. Mwa!

I found this fic both powerful and moving, wait, that's kinda' redundant. Anyway, I'll stop trying to sound sophisticated and say that this story kicks!

waaiii! sugoi sugoi sugoi! good ficcie -

._.; no hojo in hotpants *whail*

dun eat me xel-sama!

Nice! 10 out of 10! Keep writing!