|Reviews for System Down|
| RoxasIsReal13 12/30/07 . chapter 2
I'm shocked at the lack of reviews for such a creative and interesting story! Please update! Your on my favs list!
| agent-doo 1/17/06 . chapter 5
The ending of the chapter was just too cute!
| SephirothsGoddess 1/16/06 . chapter 4
Mwahaha I re-read it, lol I'm such a dork! I love this story!
| Lechan 1/13/06 . chapter 4
And the plot thickens... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! LOL Good chapter, I liked it a lot, nice twist too. - I'm happy to see Melissa and Mahlissa. - It really helped work with the plot. They gonna have a bigger role?
| Reigning Fyre 1/13/06 . chapter 4
Aw, trish ish so kewt! :clings:
| hashiba42 1/12/06 . chapter 3
*guffaws self off of chair* Oh... *wipes tears of mirth* Good chapter... More?
| Reigning Fyre 1/10/06 . chapter 3
You HAVE to keep writing this! IT'S HILARIOUS! WHO!
| Kumiku-chan 1/9/06 . chapter 3
Cool. I think i'm the first reviewer of chapter 3 (if someone else didn't while I'm typing.) That chapter was pretty funny. I think I nearly fell over when Trish... er, tried to 'seduce' them or whatever you call it. Too funny/cool._ I think I'm really getting into this story, and i'll be awaiting chapter four.
| Pick 'n' mix 1/9/06 . chapter 3
I know this wasn't meant to be representing Chobits in any way - but I have to say, I watched the anime and I felt it was slightly lacking something. (I've heard the manga is much better though...)
This story is amusing and witty - this is perhaps one of the harder subjects to capture onto paper (or webpages ;P) but I feel you've done it pretty damn well.
I can't wait to see where this leads to - and I predict I'm in for a pleasant time with this story.
Ja, ganbatte on the writing - I look forward to seeing where this goes!
| hashiba42 1/9/06 . chapter 2
Mwaha! This is shaping up great so far! Can't wait to see more of it.
| Lechan 1/9/06 . chapter 2
Oh my! That was cute! Kissing her? Sweet butt! I like that idea! But I have a few questions about Yami and Yugi. Is Yami like Minoru and Yugi Like Yuzuki? Or where they lovers before something happened? Or was Yugi replacing a girl? Please tell me?
Anyway, I really liked the discription, and how you dipicted Ryo! - He's so adorable as a Scientist hiked up on a new persocom. - And Bakura's a hoot. - Yami is a sadistic jerk (but we love that about him ne?) and Yugi kinda reminds me of a mild-Sumomo. LOL Great job, talk to you later.
P.S. Who does Trish get with?
| Reigning Fyre 1/8/06 . chapter 2
LOLZ! please keep going with this! Wonderful ideas! ::clings::
| RanDOMaZnWRIteR 1/8/06 . chapter 2
Not only is it like Chobits, but also like another manga...i think it was called 'Absolute Boyfriend' where a girl gets a mechanical lover and wakes him up with a kiss. Only, the person that kisses him is registered as his only "lover". Lots of funny stuff. :D
Your story is awesome, though. Yugi can totally be a persocom, and for some reason he seems a lot like Plum in Chobits. Was this meant to be?
I'm hoping for a new chapter soon, but take your time, if you need it. Better stories come out that way.
| Kumiku-chan 1/8/06 . chapter 2
Cool. I really liked Chobits, and it's pretty interesting the way you added and changed stuff to the persocoms. *laughs* I can so see Yugi as one. I like this alot so far and I hope to see your next chapter as soon as possible.
| agent-doo 1/7/06 . chapter 2
I like what you have written so far. I have never read Chobits so this is a new idea to me. Can't wait to read more.