cloudKKK 2008-03-10 . chapter 7tsunade naruto pwns
tsunade naruto shizune=pwnage |
niceguy122 2008-01-19 . chapter 1nice |
dragonrider666 2007-12-08 . chapter 4to bad theres no more to the story |
SSJ Guyver1 2007-12-04 . chapter 21) It's Hirashin (flying thunder god) not Body Flicker jutsu x.x
2) It was never concluded that it was a bloodline, just used seals.
3) He lacked the Kunai, the seals, and the control to use it
4) How would 'the voice' know how to use a Jutsu only the fourth knew.
5) Where did Naruto suddenly get all this seal knowledge if he did use the Hiraishin.
Sorry, but this story is fundamentally flawed in such a way that I cannot read anymore. The first chapter was bad enough, with Naruto suddenly becoming GOD basically. There was no Knowledge of the cursed seals, other than a supression seal. Even if there was a way for him to think of one, how would a GENIN get his hands on a kinjutsu used by Orochimaru, as well as TAKEN by him.
As much as I love Naru/Tsu stories,... I'm afraid this is one I can pass up,... easily. |
SSJ Guyver1 2007-12-04 . chapter 1Erm,... why is Kyuubi and Naruto on friendly terms... especially if Naruto could only get that jutsu if he gave up his right hand. That sounds more like what a EVIL being would do. Not a childhood friend... |
SSJ Guyver1 2007-09-10 . chapter 7This story would have been a lot better, hady ou laid some foundation before hand. But all you did was half-heartedly 'attempt' to explain how the characters were all OOC, with failing results. I mean, don't get me wrong, I love Naruto x Tsunade crossovers,... but this is definately not worth adding to the favorites.
Maybe go back and re-write it, adding a GREAT amount of detail, and it might. But as of now, sorry. |
mysteryman2000 2007-08-23 . chapter 1good fic |
Tzarista 2007-08-09 . chapter 7great story |
Kyuubi-Titan 2007-08-07 . chapter 7Well i really liked this fic butr feel it was too short to end like that. C'mon man u know you could update. |
Meatzman2 2007-07-01 . chapter 1this is probably one of my favorite Naruto/Tsunade fic. to all the naysayers who go on about how tsunade is 50 then read the first chapter dammit naruto gives her youth in a pretty fantastical manner but still she's more his age now in terms of appearance and they both just seek comfort which they find in eachother.
I like the banterous and half-comical writing style. good stroy mate |
Hiroshima Namikaze 2007-06-13 . chapter 2thats sick man old no offense tsunade is 50 naruto is what 16? |
Hiroshima Namikaze 2007-06-13 . chapter 1well thats gonna be a very 4 long years |
Ndasuunye 2007-05-10 . chapter 1well this chapter was alright it could have been better though. I would give it a 8 1/2 out of ten |
hibiki96 2007-03-21 . chapter 7(in a really high pitched, squeaky voice) Perfect closure! |
judge of dredd 2006-11-18 . chapter 7NO. how could you end it like this man it was just geting really good |