 AlinaLotus 2009-01-17 . chapter 1Loved it! There aren't enough Leon/Ada fics out there. Great job. |
 Sihayya22 2008-10-11 . chapter 1Beautifully written, simple but heartfelt and great character study of Ada! |
 dragondustbubblez 2008-07-09 . chapter 1This is so cute! I found this on my friend's computer and absolutely loved it. You are a great writer! Keep it up! |
 Diorelli 2007-10-26 . chapter 1I have to say this is extremely well written. I love Ada's perspective on herself and their relationship. I think you encompassed so much - their lives, hopes, thoughts - on this short piece better than some of the multi-chaptered ones. |
 Feistee 2007-07-08 . chapter 1As the previous reviewer said, the Ada/Leon relationship is something that is rarely done right, but you clearly got it. This was a wonderful piece that suited a rather complex relationship very well. Excellent work! |
 TheDonutMistress 2006-10-22 . chapter 1I found this like I often find fics on this site: I saw it on someone's favorites list.
It's really, really something. Well done Leon/Ada is pretty rare, because so few people capture the essence of their relationship.
But this was amazing. Short, but there was more than enough packed in there. Exactly how I like to hear Ada voiced.
*adds to favorites* |
 nicola-235 2006-01-12 . chapter 1I'm so glad to see some Ada/Leon around here. They need more fans, especially since they're so obviously canon.
This was probably the best Leon/Ada I've seen out there, even if it was short. (But size doesn't matter. ^_~) |
 redlei 2006-01-08 . chapter 1i like this short leonxada story=) well done! ^^, |
 gentle gwen 2006-01-08 . chapter 1Amazing fic. Perfect length, and achingly beautiful. :) |
 Metroidvania 2006-01-08 . chapter 1Cool fic. Short, but extremely potent. Continue the excellent work.^_^
Later,
MV |
 PrometheusUntied 2006-01-07 . chapter 1I really liked this piece. It was a wonderful character study, capturing a lot of meaning with few words. I particularly enjoyed being able to see more of Ada's human side and how what she has with Leon is the one thing in her life - and perhaps his as well - that truly means something, that reminds her she too has feelings and emotions. I loved the last two sentences especially and how it tied in with the idea that she really has no true name, but that the name Ada means something because Leon means something and therefore that makes it "real". |
 Ji Hyun 2006-01-07 . chapter 1I love LeonAda paring^_^
A bit short,but quite nice |