XD how many fangirls died at the end-brilliant! So awsome

Eh... LOL!

Awesome.

LOL, laughed my ass off! Very funny, certainly didn't see that coming!

^-^ nice story, but..
'santa claus doesn't exist'?

WHAT?! You foolish author! You tricked me, I'll be certain to get back at you for it! Some day when you least expect it! Wow. I'm dying from laughter right now, but I must control it because it's quite late at night. But that is beside the point. You . . . well now I don't think that this feeling I have can be represented by a single review. It's something like the genre of the 'fic - "Angst/Humor"; an ackward choice of words . . . you, as Yzak would say, 'kisama . . . *sigh, wipes tears of laughter* Well done. You've pleased and displeased me.

That was great! It had me laughing at the end, that's for sure! I felt kind of bad if any little kids in the area heard him say that, but I'm sure at that point Yzak was too into the moment to notice... Way to go!

Do you know that because of this fic I nearly died laughing on the floor? Goodness.

I had no idea what was coming. Then I went back and read it again, and I caught the tiny hint in, "twinkled." Santa's twinkling eyes, huh? Or twinkling Christmas lights and whatnot. Allusion to the holiday. Gotcha. And then I laughed even harder. You really did almost kill me.

Anyway, I enjoyed every bit of that. You write very well. Nice style, too. I can't quite pick it out, but there's something about your voice as you write that I really like. You're good at picking out certain details to describe that make the whole image that much better. Ack, whatever - I can't really word what I'm trying to say, so... Nicely done!

AHAHAHAHAHA!! Oh my gosh I was not expecting that! THAT WAS HILLARIOUS!!

HAHAHAHAHA! *Falls backwards off chair*

Aww, dedicated to me? Thank you!! And this was truly absolutely unexpected *laughs* I love this new job of mine! *grins* Can't wait to see more!
Storm

o_O Santa... claus... *lol* well, at least it was unexpected! But I prefer to ignore the last line and make up an ending of my own ^_~ heh. It was really good though, I liked it. ^^

"Santa Claus doesn't exist?!?"

I'm not sure which one to pity more, Yzak or Dearka! The one is hopelessly uptight and the other clueless!

Hysterical little piece! Beautifully deceptive too!

*falls over laughing*

Dear Lord, that was definately unexpected. I really thought it was going to be a yaoi fic. But that, that was just plain brilliant!