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| JennCorinthos 2007-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseIf I was Lindsay I would be going crazy all this sexual tension... I love it... JENNIFER |
| ReJo 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! |
| xxBuffyfreakxx 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abusehehe very nice part 2. Really liking your fic |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abusecute story! write the update soon! |
| Elainhe 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, I hope to see number three of this trilogy sooner rather than later :-). "Walking sex": perfect description. Also loved his comment about coffee shops with showers. Great - as always (at the risk of starting to sound like a gramophone that got stuck)! |
| mestiza 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAnother great oneshot. And I'm really looking forward to the third part. I'm glad you continued this cause it's pretty good. I like the way he teased her. It's kinda cute. lol And he smacked her **. Yeah, go on Danny... Dream, did you really have to mention a shower scene? Do you want to kill me? Ah I'm just kidding. LOVE it acutally. “Of course I coulda worked with you, then we’d both have to shower.” love that line ;D. I bet Lindsay would enjoy it very very much. Now I'm hoping that the third part will include another shower scene... with both of them. hehehe Chop, chop Dream! And write the next part down. Nah, just kidding. Ya don't have to hurry. Take your time!! |
| MrsGiovinazzo 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseNo place with showers? C'mon, what kinda woman could ignore that offer? If I were Lindsey, I'd ... nevermind, wrong site. *laughs* Great story. Cute interaction. |
| Axellia 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Sorry, that's not the most helpful of 'creative criticism'. But still... loved it! |
| BabyD-MontanaGirl 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED this addition! Beautiful!! Yes he is sex on legs. That ** slap was hilarious! HOT HOT HOT! Can't wait for more...am going to TalkCSI to see if it's there as well!! Go Dream! |
| hogwartsalumni 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThere had better be another addition of some sort you tease! Coffee and showers Do I look like some sort of pedigree to you... I was practically falling out of my chair...lol! |
| jolein 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved this one(what? okay I love all the fics you write ,lol) The teasing was a great. They should put that in the show cause it would be interesting to see,lol |
| XxDoreenxX 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseOMG, he did not just smacked her **?! LOL please upate soon! |
| Adamsgirl 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuse:O you have to make the next one a shower scene! :D :D anyway that was really good! :D |
| CoffeePleaze 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, loved it!! I was so excited to see you had another part of this fic up. :D |
| dannylover934 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! I can't wait for the next part! |