Reviews for Black and White

Scorched Earth 2006-01-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was a beautiful poem. You should write more if you get the chance, I would make sure to read them. ^^
Lou 2006-01-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseO_O It's a Sesshy-sized epiphany! I'm THRILLED to see a good poem here on ffn! Don't get me wrong - I've seen others that are worthy of some mention, but this is probably the best. It flowed perfectly in most places, and...wow. I can't really name a favorite part. I haven't done that in a LONG time. ^^ Thanks for reminding me why I love poetry as I do! "Within that empty heart of thine, Hidden deep within in the mind, The remnants of long ago that fate, it seems, would overthrow..." -- "Throw off these dreary bonds of white, Leave the black for dark of night. You deny emotion, for you don't know what will happen when colours flow..." -- "The flower in her hand is bright, A common thing, but still the light within her eyes shines happily, for she has found a treasure to share with me. I understand this not, of course, but laughter glisscendos from her source, and though I must be wrong, it seems to me as though her hand hold orange and green..." I'm in awe! I love it so much! huggles So much so, that I will...um...uh... Say I love it one more time: I LOVE AHT! :-D Lou
toxiclollipop 2006-01-07 ch 1,	abuseGreat work as normal! This does connect to Sesshoumaru in a way. I really liked it. I cant thinkg of any other names tho..Sorry! But still, great work!