random horay for adding an akira to the story:)
i just love it when i get to be a charachter in such a brillent piece of work even if it was non intended to be me since you dont know me but i love your work because it is so true to the actual charachters keep it up:)

I love your writing so much! I've watched a good bit of the show and I can hear their voices and it's so believable! You have a talant crim, I love it!

Your stories were recommended over at LJ and I have to say they are wonderful. I read the one before this and now this one. I really love how you developed the characters and their relationships. There were so many parts where I felt my heart ache for the characters. The ending had me blushing, but was so wonderful. I love the entire story.

I was wondering, with the lovely hints of 8/3, if you had written any stories involving Sanzo/Hakkai. I'm a huge Hakkai/Goyjo fan, but from time to time I like Sanzo/Hakkai. Since I love your writing so much I was wondering if you had any with that forbidden pairing too.

Anyway, really loved the story and thank you for sharing it.

LMAO! Sanzo and Goku?! Having a TICKLE-FIGHT?! Ahahaha! So priceless. ^-^ *dies of laughter*
Yay, 58 smut with Hakkai as the uke! Very nice~ I love it when these two have their tender moments.
Another thing I really like about this chapter is Lirin at the end. I've never liked Lirin so much until recently, and the way you write Lirin makes me like her more. ^-^

Oh, what a cliff-hanger this is. Of course, my favorite parts are the Gojyo/Hakkai scenes. I love 85, be it as friends or more.

It is now 2am and I just finished reading this story. Dear lord, that was probably one of the greatest stories ever written on here. I am so sorry that there no way to pay you for this wonderful bit of awesomeness. I have been rooting for these couples since the last story and I'm so glad that Sanzo has calmed down considerably. I was so upset when they got caught by Nii (that bastard) and when they went through the experiment the way they did, I wanted to cry at each heartbreak (even Kou & Yaone). I'm glad everything turned out great in the end.

The final chapter is nothing but fantastic. Gotta love the man-love there. And have them all do it in the same room at the same time...never saw that coming. Thanks again for another great story. I guess I'll get started on the other one tomorrow :)

I really liked this chapter, I love the whole romancing between Goku and Sanzo.

I DID IT! I read the entire fic! that was hard. but I did it.
oh I love the end! that was hot and...well perfect.
the whole fic was perfect. yes.
well done.

(and now, I have to read the 3th part XD)

ok.
when I start to read, I'd think: "I will read all and then, I will leave a comment".
but now, with tears on my cheeks and sob in my throat, I CAN'T NOT leave a review.
god! I know that the story wouldn't end like that but...
man, I'm crying, and crying and...I can't see my keyboard anymore!

Heh. I lost the URL for a while; AKA, I was too lazy to go and type Crimson1 into the search bar.
But then I picked it up again, read s'more, and needed to review here, becuase of the whole Pippin thing.

that was even better than the frist story you write soo well! so mcuh description all these images flowining through my head
gah!!
you just keep it up!!

the prequel and this are excellent but to be honest i liked ur " obliagatory sex epilogue " best. ur portrayal of the characters was excellent . u made them real it was pretty easy to imagine wht was going on in the story. and tht is the mark of a true writer.

I was re-reading the manga volumes that I have and I was overcome by the need to re-read ‘If It Were Only This Easy’ and ‘Even Easy Has Problems’ in absolute conjunction. As I remarked in my reviews at the time (I think; maybe I only thought it to myself) this story feels so cannon it’s scary. But immensely satisfying.
I’m ashamed to admit I haven’t visited you’re profile in a long while so I hadn’t realised you’d started the 3rd part, but I’ll start reading it tomorrow – I’ve been up till 3 reading your work. Not that I regret it at all.
Thank you for the fun.
Sleeping now…

i enjoyed the story so much even the double sex scenes were they are all in the same room together i think it was rathersweet myself. anyway more chapters hopefully asap

OMFG.. I love this story!! It only gets better, and the BEST part is you're making a second sequel (is there a name for that?)! *hugs you* I can't believe this took me like... five weeks to read, ah, well, I'm swamped with homework and other junk. I liked the last chapter the best. *giggle* I giggled all the way through it and I fell off my bed at some parts. (my parents got pissed cuz I woke them up...) Anyway, I'm off to read the next part and I'm sure I'll love it! Don't ever stop writing, you got skillz with da pencil.