Sigh... you really do need to write more of this. It was very good- I even liked how you did Wufei, and that's unusual, because I don't normally like how most writers portray him. But you did a good job! :) Can't wait to see the rest...

Bad news, folks! Not only did my whole WORD file on Alpha Target get trashed, but my GW WORD fifty plus page humor story Off Duty also got trashed, along with a yaoi DoA2 one I was working on and the first and second chapters of Beta Target! I'm so...so...this is injustice! }:(

Awesome! Cant wait for more! :)

Well written, very sad. Please write more!