amazing!

waa...great fic! I enjoyed reading it thanks!

Wow, great story!
It´s amazing how very well you write the characters, especially Alfred!
I stumbled across this fic by coincidence but am going to read the rest of it soon. It´s really good so far and well-written!

*clapping*
Wonderful! I love Alfred and I think you've captured him perfectly!

That was a good story! *huggles you*

Aw, what cute lil chappie. I think I will check out that author you mentioned. :)

A chicken and a box of crayons? I don't suppose you'd be willing to tell more of that story? :P Anyway, this is really good. *goes to read more* XD

I have to say that the 1st couple of chapters seem to have been put more thought in that last couple of chapters, they seem a bit rushed. But in general I enjoyed this story, with a rare theme (so far) for Batman Fanfic - H/C. So thanks for writing :)

Very nice beginning. I'm off to read more at once!

my first bat reading and won't be the last - great fun

Hey there,

Dude, fabulous, fabulous story. You really captured the feeling of the movie(s). I realize you wrote this a while ago, but I hope you read this nonetheless. I really liked how you paced the story, making it not too long, but not too short. The little heartfelt moments were there, and they made the story all the more real. And I also thank you for leaving out one rather annoying assistant DA from your story. This was good. Really good.

Have you seen The Dark Knight? Opening day, it was amazing. If you haven't gone, for heaven's sake GO! Bruce Wayne never looked so good.

Peace, love and joy,
MG*

Hi :)
Im really liking your story, its amazing! the detail you put into the dialog and the descriptions is wonderful :)
Your story is so intriguing, i just want to keep reading and reading which is a good thing for me and you considering it takes ALOT to get me interested in a good story, so well done!
i could see this as a movie one day, ;)
Anyway just thought i'd show my appreciation of this awsome story and i hope you continue to write because you have a gift :)
sincerely, Bree

This is a really interesting story so far. I like your use of comic book characters and movie-verse characters. You've blended them well and the plot is intriguing. Your pacing is really nice too, setting up good tension for what will happen next and not rushing. Some really beautiful character moments. Good work!

This is a really well-written piece with wonderful character moments! Your writing is subtle and evocative. I like your blending of the comic book and movie-verses too. Good work so far and looking forward to the following chapters.

Awesome work. Many congradulations on actually finishing a story, a feat which many author/authoresses never seem to do.

And for the record, I love comforting!Batman.
And Jenn. She's cute.

:3