Great story, i've been reading all of your stories to get back i n the flow of writing drama angst and horror. this is my first Mouse detective story i've ever read. really good. great grammar, story build up and believable end.

xXDasXGoochXx

I'm crying! GOSH DANGIT! This is a wonderful story!

This story is very good. I like how it flows. Enough dialogue is present, and the characters grow too. Good job.

Ani

I absolutely love this story. The plot is incredible and kept me reading straight through the entire thing. Very sad for awhile there. Very good job.

*smile* The way you play with the reader's emotions and make them feel just what each character feels is astounding and I am quite envious of that. Nice job!

Very good fic. I enjoyed it.

Love

Grogie13

Very fascinating story! Your summery captured my attention, and it was held till the very end. Though I would have liked to see more developement of the story, instead of making it so short, I do submit that it is very well done overall. If you ever get a chance, you should try making it longer...expanding. It's such a wonderful plot idea that you could probably make a novel type fanfic if you wanted. Thank you very much for the read.

Sincerely,

Serenity202

Wow, a prologue! _ Short, but beautiful & very well-written. :-)

BONNIE & CONNIE: *nodding their heads in agreement*

Cool story.

EagleBlaze954

So beautiful

Oh, and I feel the need to point out his housekeeper's name in Mrs.Judson

Beautiful story! I know you published it awhile ago, but I still wanted to review it! Great!

Aww. I really liked this story.

"My Da is so smart."

So sweet! Please write more stories!

Very good, had me hooked from the start. Ratigan is truely evil in this one, you wrote him well! Sweet ending too, I feel so bad for Leesha and Basil.

Well, I'm off to read the sequel!

This is a very fascinating story! I like it! _

P.S. Would you like to read my stories & review them? ;)

Aw what a nice ending. All's well that ends well. Good story overall and rock on.

Wow. That's all I can say. I'm sorry it's over, it was well written and the characters were well drawn.

God Bless.