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Grogie13
2008-07-25
ch 7,
abuse*smile* The way you play with the reader's emotions and make them feel just what each character feels is astounding and I am quite envious of that. Nice job!

Very good fic. I enjoyed it.

~Love~
~Grogie13~
Serenity202
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseVery fascinating story! Your summery captured my attention, and it was held till the very end. Though I would have liked to see more developement of the story, instead of making it so short, I do submit that it is very well done overall. If you ever get a chance, you should try making it longer...expanding. It's such a wonderful plot idea that you could probably make a novel type fanfic if you wanted. Thank you very much for the read.

Sincerely,

Serenity202
The Mouse Avenger
2008-01-06
ch 10,
abuseWow, a prologue! ^_^ Short, but beautiful & very well-written. :-)

BONNIE & CONNIE: *nodding their heads in agreement*
EagleBlaze954
2007-08-19
ch 14,
abuseCool story.

EagleBlaze954
jet-phantom-flame
2007-06-02
ch 14,
abuseSo beautiful ^^

Oh, and I feel the need to point out his housekeeper's name in Mrs.Judson
goldnote
2006-07-01
ch 15,
abuseBeautiful story! I know you published it awhile ago, but I still wanted to review it! Great!
deepofnight
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseAww. I really liked this story.
"My Da is so smart."
So sweet! Please write more stories!!
Celeste38
2006-02-01
ch 15,
abuseVery good, had me hooked from the start. Ratigan is truely evil in this one, you wrote him well! Sweet ending too, I feel so bad for Leesha and Basil.

Well, I'm off to read the sequel!
The Mouse Avenger
2006-01-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very fascinating story! I like it! ^_^

P.S. Would you like to read my stories & review them? ;)
James Barker
2006-01-21
ch 15,
abuseAw what a nice ending. All's well that ends well. Good story overall and rock on.
MeadowLark4491
2006-01-18
ch 15,
abuseWow. That's all I can say. I'm sorry it's over, it was well written and the characters were well drawn.
God Bless.
lightening816
2006-01-18
ch 15,
abuseWhat a wonderful ending!
EndlessMemories
2006-01-16
ch 15,
abuseaww that was cool and creative,i liked it! interesting insights throughout the story into Basil's past, it devolped the characters well. =D
James Barker
2006-01-16
ch 9,
abuseOh my god. What a bastard. I know Ratigan was evil but this. Anyway continue on. I wanna read the end of this. Rock on!
AlexTheHurricane
2006-01-15
ch 9,
abuseI absolutely love this story. I truly hope they won't hurt Olivia...can't wait to read what happens next!
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