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Advent Antigone
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseUm...I love Kamio; He's my favorite guy from Prince of Tennis, but this story...Needs help...There's nothing horrible about it, but you need to be more descriptive. Everybody knows what it's like to have a crush, so you need to go more in depth into what Kamio is feeling. Keep on writing; You'll improve, I promise. I see potential.
-Shaitan
p.s. Kudos for entertaining me; I despise the KamioxAnn pairing...Just looked this up because I was bored.
Kai-Cresent-Moon
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseHis line is so cheesy, but I love the kamio ann pairing. There should be more of these. When I saw momo ann I was all: wth? That's why I only read ryosaku. And one fujiOc lol

Ajanae
Shiraishi-K
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you wrote Kamio XD he is adorable when he's with Ann and i hope you write a sequel (if it's not too late)
kpy424
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was really cute. I love the KamioAnn pairing. You should continue it so we can see some fluff.
DarkChaosWolf
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was cute. And original too. I don't understand how Tachibana suddenly got violent and blond again though. Great work!
keijijyou
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseYou should continue this! Write about the date itself. I definitely see some fluff coming~! ^_^
Kocopo
2006-01-25
ch 1,
abusehaha~
cute! :)
^^
2006-01-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseKamioAnn, that's rare! ^^
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