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| Advent Antigone 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseUm...I love Kamio; He's my favorite guy from Prince of Tennis, but this story...Needs help...There's nothing horrible about it, but you need to be more descriptive. Everybody knows what it's like to have a crush, so you need to go more in depth into what Kamio is feeling. Keep on writing; You'll improve, I promise. I see potential. -Shaitan p.s. Kudos for entertaining me; I despise the KamioxAnn pairing...Just looked this up because I was bored. |
| Kai-Cresent-Moon 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseHis line is so cheesy, but I love the kamio ann pairing. There should be more of these. When I saw momo ann I was all: wth? That's why I only read ryosaku. And one fujiOc lol Ajanae |
| Shiraishi-K 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you wrote Kamio XD he is adorable when he's with Ann and i hope you write a sequel (if it's not too late) |
| kpy424 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute. I love the KamioAnn pairing. You should continue it so we can see some fluff. |
| DarkChaosWolf 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was cute. And original too. I don't understand how Tachibana suddenly got violent and blond again though. Great work! |
| keijijyou 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseYou should continue this! Write about the date itself. I definitely see some fluff coming~! ^_^ |
| Kocopo 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abusehaha~ cute! :) |
| ^^ 2006-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseKamioAnn, that's rare! ^^ |