hello there, i PMed you a while ago about this impersination thing, and well, here i am! this is a great story! i love kamoiioxan, pls. keep writing'

Um...I love Kamio; He's my favorite guy from Prince of Tennis, but this story...Needs help...There's nothing horrible about it, but you need to be more descriptive. Everybody knows what it's like to have a crush, so you need to go more in depth into what Kamio is feeling. Keep on writing; You'll improve, I promise. I see potential.
-Shaitan
p.s. Kudos for entertaining me; I despise the KamioxAnn pairing...Just looked this up because I was bored.

His line is so cheesy, but I love the kamio ann pairing. There should be more of these. When I saw momo ann I was all: wth? That's why I only read ryosaku. And one fujiOc lol

Ajanae

I love the way you wrote Kamio XD he is adorable when he's with Ann and i hope you write a sequel (if it's not too late)

That was really cute. I love the KamioAnn pairing. You should continue it so we can see some fluff.

Aw, that was cute. And original too. I don't understand how Tachibana suddenly got violent and blond again though. Great work!

You should continue this! Write about the date itself. I definitely see some fluff coming~! ^_^

haha~
cute! :)

KamioAnn, that's rare! ^^