too funny man i counldn't stop laughing

This was a wonderful story, the characterization was perfect, the plot was lighthearted and fun, I really like your sense of humor. I also liked the open ending, but I'm glad you decided to write an additional chapter, Xelloss's 'punishment' was hillarious... serves him right ;) Very nice!

Please I beg u finish this with another encore or chapter. I loved it!. . And if i am not asking too much maybe a little kiss action . If u r angry i didn't mean to upset you with my last comment. Just please finish this story with another chapter. The final one .

I LOVE THIS STORY! You should add more!

The ending part with Zel finding out what really happened gave hilarious a new definition! It was a good thing that no one was there when I was laughing my laughing-uh-oh! See now look what you've done... I was laughing so much, that I typed laughing twice!

nice story... cute and funny... really liked it... good job... great work...

Ah, poetic justice. XD Really enjoyable.

I Love This.

hey wow i really loved this story it was very funny lol especially at the end with amelia and xellos he got a taste of his own medicine lol

i really thought that lina and zegadis should have gotten married though it would have been weird for him to wake up from that curse married too lina lol well hope to hear from you soon and keep up the good work -

i luv this story!ehehehehe!

MONKEY DANCE!

I'm Dancing Like a Money!

p.s. SO god so far. need more. must read more.

Monkey Dance

iwas on the ground roleing i was dieing i ws crying of laughter ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha hha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha haha oh and you really di try to it the chariter unn what the word personatly and that but you sorta lost it when zel calmed down with lina but you tryed but i love it anyway iv been reading fanfic for about 5 years now so thank you for making my day

U EVIL PERSON!U CANT END IT THIS WAY!U R SO CRUEL!I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!U CANT JUST END IT!

LOL! (O) HONEY, THIS WAS *INSPIRED*! I'M SO GLAD I FOUND IT! (O)

Hahahaha! Xellos' trick backfired! Zel was so cute in this story, I loved it!