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| spnMom 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a great one shot. I love when the brothers fight, especially if it is a good natured battle. Great brother moments. Thanks! |
| TraSan 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm not sure what series of clicks landed me on this story, but it was hilarious. I loved your brotherly banter and bonding in this story. |
| astalder27 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseLOL!! I love it-great job! |
| luvondarox 2007-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the sibling reactions between the brothers in this story - you did an awesome job. Something tells me that Dean's not going to let Sam get away with it though... |
| MollybyGolly 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abusehahaha. awesome story. :L |
| Ciya 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseHilarious! If you can't harrass your brother then who can you harrass? |
| Drink Sparky Cola 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseCrazy, bizarre little story--but fun though! :) One technical comment though--you seem to be overly fond of hyphens. You don't need them in some places where the hyphenated words are really one word, or two separate words. Some apostrophes were missing too, but nothing serious that hampered my enjoyment--it's a cute lil' fluff story. ~KG |
| KwiditchJunkie 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorable! I'm totally making that a favorite! I liked the comment about a punk kid throwing gummi bears also. Very clever. Nice job! I look forward to more SN fanfics from you. |
| glorfinniel 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHee, that was great! :) I love it when the pair of them bicker! |
| beyondtired 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI had to go and read the rest of your stories after reading Advent and this one came first. It was hilarious! Sam so got one over on Dean - well, more like three or four over on Dean. Too funny! |
| Bluy 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilarious!! It would be a perfect April's Fool joke! Anyway, this story was awesome. Loved it from beginning to end. |
| Julia Holtemore 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThis story is excellent! I love your style of writing! You have a great vocabulary, yet you aren't too wordy. Plus you capture the way Dean and Sam act toward each other perfectly! I love it! I've read your other one, too, about the red gummie bears, and I love that one too! I'm gonna go review it in a sec. Anyway, great job! This is going on my favs! |
| Brookey Babe 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! Very nice, great job! |
| Kaewi 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseJust catching up on some of your other stories. I really like this one, it's so light-hearted and funny! I love the "punk kid" throwing gummy bears. |
| Chibi-Chichan 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY! I thoroughly enjoyed it. |