Ooh- very interesting fic. I like the way you relate Chase and House's relationship to that of House's other major relationships- Wilson and Stacy. Canon House is actually quite angsty, I think, and this type of development between the two, at least the way you write it, doesn't seem that far off. At least in my opinion. But slash goggles are a permanent fixture on my face, anyway, so my opinion may differ from most.

I'm a sucker for angry-angsty-self-loathing fanfic and this fit it all. I'm not usually for second person writing but for some reason it fits well with the House characters. I'm a House/Wilson shipper, not just because I see great tention between them but also an emotional dependancy. But I find dominantHouse/submissiveChase to be incredibly HOT. Simple as that. So thank you for making it work!

This is *good*. character-centric, canonical, atmospheric, and I just happen to adore House/Chase, second person, and present tense. so you hit all my good-fic buttons :D definitely well-written; I like "backlit by windows full of yellow-white stars and black sky" and "you want this thing to start unfolding" and "when you laugh it sounds ugly in the cramped space of the car." Your House is such a terrible guy, a bit too terrible for my taste but it works, it's accurate to his character. And Chase is good too. adding this to my favorites!

Hm...
hugs,
voldie

when i saw you had a new house fic up it was crazy because i checked everytime i was on the site for like ever and then today i dont bother to look and of course, ta da!
first of all i have to say that i generally dont go in for the slash fic pairings. i am open minded (a little less so with guy/guy than with girl/girl) but it does make me a tad squeamish. second, if there's ever been a person talented and respectful enough to make it work, particularly in such a short fic, then it's you. so third: i am going to select some parts that rocked, despite my squeamishness:

he wrote himself onto your skin.
i like this because it's quite original. it is sexy and it is viseral.

watching him watch you is getting really old.
nice rythm to that and it has truth. everyone watches house. everyone is obsessed. it's barely sexual. it's almost past that.

this thing with you seems near incestuous, with Chase looking for some kind of redemption and you making it perfectly clear that it’s unattainable while whispering try try try against his body.
incestuous. oddly, i think i would have been even more accepting of this piece if you'd gone into that more. i loved when you did but when you didnt and it started being about physical pleasure i would lose conviction.

regret is the perfect alibi.
complexity wrapped in shiny happy paper. it's so simple. i swear this is the most complex line in the piece though i read it over a couple of times before realizing.

loved how you go back to stacy in the end. acknowledge that hang up because, yeah, stacy is kind of crappy but she is what the writers have made and it isn't really fair to deny the show it's conclusions.
anyway. no, i never did get that email- would love to get one though.
happy fic-ing.

My god, this is great. Really, really sexy while still being angsty. Although angsty is sexy too. I don't think there's anything more I can say, except that I have already read it twice in succession. I love the characterization of House and his desperation.

My favorite line: "you’re in a hurry when you come in his mouth because it’s Friday and you don’t want to miss General Hospital." Funny and hot, winning combination. Keep up the good work. You now have a devoted reader.