I can just picture her saying that last sentence to herself. It fits her nicely. You may want to make it a teensy bit longer, but otherwise, it's great.

A little bit too short, but "Remember Me" is my favorite episode!

Definitely captures her feelings at the time, or at least was she was probably feeling - you can't exactly do a TV show in first person.

Iu'm sure that if I had evr seen the episode "Remember Me" this would be very good. since I have not my opinion means nothing.