oh no! continue

keep up the great work please
this is a great story

cool story hope there's more becouse it sounds great so far and i want to read more

Like my children and their friends who watch the Ranma 1/2 anime series that we got for them, Xain-Pu (Shanpo) is one my favorite characters. Also one of mine in fanfics too. That said, it should be fairly obvious that I hope you let her continue in your story!

I really do like your story, and think the possibilities are endless. I look forward to seeing where you go with it.


May the MUSES always be with you!
-_^

Hey, can you please update this again? The whole cliffhanger thing is kind of annoying.
Whether or not Xian Pu survives, mere death is going to be too kind for Mu Tsu - particularly when he is informed of the consequences of his reckless actions...
I am a little surprised at the stubborness of the supposed adult Tendo and Saotomes. I mean Ranma killed a god, has made it perfectly crystal clear that he's going to keep his promise to raise Nyoko (and cause grevious bodily harm to any threat to her wellbeing), and they're trying to either get rid of her or raise her themselves? They aren't really that stupid are they?

Wow.. Really good so far. I don't mind much of the "OOC" ness in the story. And the ending of this last chapter... Pretty sad. Unless you have Theo work some magic, though I don't think he can bring back the dead. Not to mention doing so would really lessen the effect it would have on the story, but still, it's within reason to have Theo fix it, I'd think. Other than that, I would think that Ranma would want to get pretty far away from nerima. It would be odd for Nabiki to think they could hide at a place she was looking to rent for when she went to university... When you want to hide, it's generally good to find a place no-one knows you're at, or even think you'd go to. But that's just my opinion. Hope you pick the story back up.

it's good story hope you can fix the next chapter soon

interesting please update soon.

Update this soon man, it's getting really interesting.

Wow, this is a gripping story.. I hope you'll continue this soon.

why must the good die young!

*Teary eyed* Sham-chan...no...KILL THE DAMN DUCK! *Holds out a cook book* AND THEN EAT IT!

I really HATE cliff-hangers like these, so you better update soon. I NEED to know what happens next. As for Xian-Pu... I hope she survives, but whether she does or doesn't, Mu Tsu is going to die.

love the story. I rarely find good Ranma/Nabiki stories as good as this one, and never with FatherRanma. You've got a great backstory, a complex plot, good room for growth, good characterization, good interactions, and grammer sentence structure and word choices with just enough variation to keep interest without being chaotic. It would be a shame not to continue this story. I'll look forward to any updates you might do if you regain the muse and take it off hiatus.

This cliff-hanger is killer, man. Definitely looking forward to the next one. Can you e-mail me when it is? I kinda don't check often enough, but e-mail is every day (have ta for school)