I was wondering what Lucy and Tumnus did upon their second meeting with one another. It is interesting to know what they were up to while Edmund was associating with the White Witch. This story is very good; I say it fills up the gap in the movie quite nicely. Keep up the good work!

This was absolutely excellent! Lucy and Mr.Tumnus rang very true in everything they said and did, and I particularly liked the fact that the fic was from Mr.Tumnus point of view, as I tried writing the same scene from Lucy's (I only came across your story after I'd written that one, I hasten to add) In short, I liked it immensely!

Oh, thank you for writing this! I had been wondering what they did on Lucy's second visit. I liked your ideas on that. I also liked that Lucy did not let Tumnus walk her out because she didn't want to be seen with him. She does come across as a sensible little girl.

Lovely story! I went ahead and added it to Narnian Lullabies. :)

That was very good and well-written. It does match the movie perfectly, although I don't know about the book, since it's four years since I last read it and can barely remember how things went exactly. But it's a nice read, nonetheless. :D

Ohh! That was lovely and well-written. You have several phrases that I really like. For example, "She outshone the fire. She could melt the snow." and "in Narnia, Man was a dream come true." and speaking of Tumnus' "long, lithe fingers." I actually copied that last bit to reference the same in my fan fic. Do you mind?

One little thing occurred to me--I don't know if you care--but I think I remember Lucy saying in the movie that she was having lunch with Mr. Tumnus on the second visit, not just tea.

Oh, I really, really liked this! You were VERY in character. You put me to shame. When Lucy said, "No, your a very smart faun!" I thought to myself, "That's so like Lucy! Very charitable and generous when it comes to other people even though she doesn't really know whether he's smart or not. Then when it comes to herself she looses her certianty. I REALLY loved Tumnus just being intruiged and enchanted by everything she says or does. I think you did great.

XDD i've got that satisfied feeling inside that comes after i read a really good fic. thanks for writing this one! i've always felt it was a shame lewis never included it. you did justice to the characters and the events while still being original, and that's all anyone can ever ask. :D very, very nice job.

This fic is sweet. I could almost see this as a missing scene more for the movie, but for the book it could work.

When you had Tumnus call Lucy his dear little friend, I could help remembering Prince Caspian, becuase the Pevensies call someone they know that. Not going to spoil you if you haven't read it.

There are some minor grammar errors and this is how you spell pajamas.

All and all, good work with this, cute.