Wow...that was awesome. You put so much insight into Romeo that I nearly cried. The idea that he heard her voice after it was too late is incredibly sad, almost like Lurhmann's R+J. Wonderful!

That was a good idea, but it would have been better if you had kept Romeo's actual thuoghts (i.e. the things he thought in words,) true to the prose of Shakespear's time. In other words, if you'd written Romeo's thoughts in true Elizabethan prose.

I love this ^_^ You got all the emotions right, and thank God, you didn't make any mistakes in terms of plot and meaning! 10/10! (and this is going onto my Favourites list!)

Wonderfully done.

Wow. That's all I can say is 'wow'. This is incredable, you are a really good writer! Keep it up!