...XD THAT WAS SO RETARDED I PISSED MYSELF! XD

I played Sonic Heroes and Shadow the hedgehog and I couldn't help pissing out laughing at that. XD

“That’s right. You are apart of me!” Black Doom paused and looked down to see Shadow hugging him.

“MOMMY!” Shadow cried happily.

“GET THE FUCK OFF ME!”

XDD Especially at the end of chapter one and three I had a fit of laughter

"Wait, WHAT?" Team rose Mission failed. XD

LOL

*munches popcorn*

omg that sucks for Amy

rofl Amy's so stupid..haha

i basically died from laughter XD


“Do you really think... that the professor created Shadow to carry out the revenge on all those who live there, on Earth?” Rouge asked.

“Well… yeah. Didn’t you read the diary that proved it?”

Rouge stepped on Sonic’s foot.

“OW! I mean… He was what he was. A brave and heroic hedgehog, who gave his life to save his planet. Shadow the Hedgehog...”




lmao XD

Amy is really mean but this is very funny.

love it man keep it up you rule when it comes to laughs

XDXDXD That was hilarious! Awesome job!

Genius! Pure genius! This chapter was really funny! I enjoyed reading it. Especially the beginning with Big and Amy falling off LOL =D . Very awesome chapter ^_~

ya know what your my new favorite authour this is the shit man its funnyier than hell i hate shadow so WEET job makin funn of him rock on liz rock on

Sonic and Shadow are a bunch of nuts...

THAT'S SHADOW'S INFAMOUS LINE? Dude...

That was pretty funny. Not AS funny as the first chapter, but still really funny. I wonder why Shadow thinks Doom is his mom instead of his dad. Is it because Doomy's face looks like a...um...you know. :D

Wow...if only SA2 was really like that. XD
It'd probably create even more controversy than GTA >_>

hehehe, funny^^ reading all those lines we remember so well again was cool..."do i qualify as one of your children?" had me laughing so hard it hurt XD I sure hope you´ll add a sonic heroes ending as well...just one final question: the line about sonic being the ultimate lifeform after all, is this the one you made fun of in me myself sonic and I? which he supposedly says five seconds before you lose...I always finished with soem time to spare, so i don´t know. am i right?

'Vector turned around and smacked Charmy, “WHAT’S MY NAME BITCH?” he shouted.

“V-vector!” Charmy cried.'

It looked like we were getting into sado-masochism there for a moment...XD The Chaotix parts were certainly the best, and the ending was unexpected and hilarious. All of this was. It has a lot of great quotes, too, as you can see above. Great work, just like everything else you've done. :D