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| littlestdevil 2007-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! that was HOT!! nice ficlet you should definitly write more fics!! ^.^ |
| icaughtfire 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseOh. Hot. |
| SpySkater 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! You're a first timer. No way! That was way hot. You should do more Palex stories. |
| Yella 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThe only thing that bothers me about it is that it's short lived. Love to see this story more detailed and sent on to become a bigger fic. Awesome though, and stick with the idea :) |
| phyca 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI never did understand the whole run to the bathroom to make out thing in femmeslash. But dude, hot. And really, those two need to be making out every chance they can, everywhere they can. And you need to be writing that stuff for them. |
| Browncoatsoldier 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseActually, i quite liked it. It was kinda natural, you know. I could see it happening on the show. Paige's smirk is a definate show possibility |
| Casandra 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseNever would have guessed you were a first time fic writer. Great stuff, really. The level of detail was great. :) |
| wiltar 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseFirst fanfic? Nicely done! I liked it :-) It would have been great if it had been a little bit longer, but I'll take any Palex-fic! So please, continue to write, I would love to read more |
| Torak the Slash Lover 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOkay...I don't know what the hell is wrong with that mpdfreak1023 chick, but...Immature much? Sorry, but she bugs me. Jesus, it's just kissing! Actually..it's not just kissing. It was...very hot kissing. Ravinous, once could say. Bloody brilliant |
| nikoncoolpix 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseEW! That ought to be rated NC-17! I love Palex (infact I'm writing a fic of my own)...but that was just GROSS! |
| sabbath purr 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseYum. I loved it. Hope to see more from you! |